@Gunner1001
I like the concept in its own, the sounds aren't clean enough, while some samples are so it makes a sort of conflict between the samples and the sounds you made, it's not so nice to ear, the melodies are pretty catchy, sometimes your low pitching could sounds a bit weird (maybe fix it with pitching your kick with kontakt)
Overall, it as potential, keep it up ! (I also love the beginning part)
@F8
Not my cup of tea, but like Gunner said, keep doing things your own way !
My first attempt making a Euphoric Hardstyle track (climax part), kick isn't mine (I know, I'm shameful, if some of you got any advices on how to make this kind of kick, I'd really appreciate if you could share it with me)
EDIT :
I finally made a whole track based on that melody
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Gunner1001
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thankx for your your feedback KRB , i listen to your snippet 
the key of the kick on 9 seconds and 10 seconds seems wrong somehow , maby try another key / pitch in the kick
same goes for the '' high '' kick at 19 seconds , it seems also that maby another key would sound better with this
for the rest , nice melody , im curious what whould happen if you put the main lead ( square lead ? ) with some extra decay on it 
( reverb ) , i think it will sound larger in total , more epic
for the whole track , i love the piano start , but when the synth comes in , those 2 combined sound also not pitched even , not keying with each other , and because the rest of the melody in the track is based not on the piano sounds , maby you should or make the piano part fit in better , orrrr , maby record a automation clip where you turn the pitch slowly down to the right level of key in comparison with the synth melody .
i like the track for the rest , catchy stuff .
and as weird as it sounded in the snippet , the high kicks sound allright in the complete track , did you changed it a little bit in the track ?
the key of the kick on 9 seconds and 10 seconds seems wrong somehow , maby try another key / pitch in the kick
same goes for the '' high '' kick at 19 seconds , it seems also that maby another key would sound better with this
for the rest , nice melody
, im curious what whould happen if you put the main lead ( square lead ? ) with some extra decay on it ( reverb ) , i think it will sound larger in total , more epic for the whole track , i love the piano start , but when the synth comes in , those 2 combined sound also not pitched even , not keying with each other , and because the rest of the melody in the track is based not on the piano sounds , maby you should or make the piano part fit in better , orrrr , maby record a automation clip where you turn the pitch slowly down to the right level of key in comparison with the synth melody .
i like the track for the rest
, catchy stuff .and as weird as it sounded in the snippet , the high kicks sound allright in the complete track
, did you changed it a little bit in the track ?Thank you Gunner for your feedback !
Well in the climax part I though there was 2 much "2 notes" kicks, so I decided to replace 2 different pitches by a G# one during 4 notes, in order to make it sounds better
About the piano it's because it's played on 2 octaves, I'll try to add more decay on the square next time,
But thank you a lot for your feedback !
Well in the climax part I though there was 2 much "2 notes" kicks, so I decided to replace 2 different pitches by a G# one during 4 notes, in order to make it sounds better
About the piano it's because it's played on 2 octaves, I'll try to add more decay on the square next time,
But thank you a lot for your feedback !
@KRB-MP Dude you have improved a lot! That last track was really better than the other stuff i saw from you
The build up to the intro is good, the intro itself its driving (you could improve the mix/mastering because kick and screech sounds too "crispy" but its decent enough).
The melody is good, you should use some high pass filter on the buid up to the climax to make the drop more "explosive". In the climax the melody is a bit drowned by the kick.
The outro is a bit annoying with the piano, i would just quit it or make it lower on volumen
Over all good track man!
Im working on this at the moment, let me know your thoughts!
The build up to the intro is good, the intro itself its driving (you could improve the mix/mastering because kick and screech sounds too "crispy" but its decent enough).
The melody is good, you should use some high pass filter on the buid up to the climax to make the drop more "explosive". In the climax the melody is a bit drowned by the kick.
The outro is a bit annoying with the piano, i would just quit it or make it lower on volumen
Over all good track man!
Im working on this at the moment, let me know your thoughts!
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@Cryptex,
I actually like the break pretty much, the buildup is nice, only thing is the reverb doesnt seems to fit with the current lead synth and for my taste there's too release on it
overall it' kinda good!! i like it! 
@Emi,
Pretty much same story, i would replace that squarish synth by an another one and i would add some gliding .. (that's personal taste tho) but it's a good start!
and for myself would be my collab with Dinamo :
I actually like the break pretty much, the buildup is nice, only thing is the reverb doesnt seems to fit with the current lead synth and for my taste there's too release on it
overall it' kinda good!! i like it! @Emi,
Pretty much same story, i would replace that squarish synth by an another one and i would add some gliding ..
(that's personal taste tho) but it's a good start!and for myself would be my collab with Dinamo :
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discjunkies
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@Krystaal, @EMi, @Cryptex. All three sound pretty awesome to me, I am listening to music and producing music with shit speakers so cant give much feedback on mixdown, but sound design sounds good.
Heres a preview of a track im working on thats a little different, kind of Hard Psyish, 180 BPM
Mainly need feedback on the mixdown cause Im using a Bose Soundtouch 30 to produce and it is very difficult to hear the mix properly.
Thanks
Heres a preview of a track im working on thats a little different, kind of Hard Psyish, 180 BPM
Mainly need feedback on the mixdown cause Im using a Bose Soundtouch 30 to produce and it is very difficult to hear the mix properly.
Thanks
@discjunkies the mix its pretty good, the only thing i can complain about is the vocal. i cant hear it properly specially in the 2:31 part. i usually put the vocal -4 -3 db than the kick. also the last drop sounds more empty than the rest. overall cool track
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@EMi
Nice kick!
The synths sound a bit empty and thin to me. Also, that outro part with the vocal sounds really messy to my ears. Besides that, I have nothing to complain about. Keep on producing man, you're making progress!
Really, really short snippet of a collab, including a try on a psy-ish kick:
Nice kick!
The synths sound a bit empty and thin to me. Also, that outro part with the vocal sounds really messy to my ears. Besides that, I have nothing to complain about. Keep on producing man, you're making progress!
Really, really short snippet of a collab, including a try on a psy-ish kick:
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AzukiMinaduki
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I feel like the kick could be a bit more distorted, at least in the sub part, but it sounds pretty cool!SKRWD wrote:@EMi
Nice kick!
The synths sound a bit empty and thin to me. Also, that outro part with the vocal sounds really messy to my ears. Besides that, I have nothing to complain about. Keep on producing man, you're making progress!
Really, really short snippet of a collab, including a try on a psy-ish kick:
i'm currently working on a remix of a popular trapish song
im not quite sure about the main lead, or if i should use another kick