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The Earfucker
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Post by The Earfucker »

Thanks for the good feedbacks !!!
I still need to learn to make a good downmix

@ Snoop : sounds like pro
Nice vocals
Good structure

The melody is all the way up
Good job

@typhonmusic : nice lead
only much has to be done
now A nice intro to make the track finish
And add some breaks through the kick loop
or make some glitch effects
And some nice fx to build up a nice clymax and admosphere

@EMi :sounds nice too
With some nice vocals to complete it

Here 2 new tracks i made :



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@The Earfucker i have to say the same than before. those tracks are complete and sounds good but i think that it needs work on mix, make it more driving, and i miss some bass on the kick too. just work on that and im sure youll do an amazing work ! :)

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@EMi

The first part with the psy kick is chaotic in the low end. Or maybe the kick and bass is just not right. Also I feel like there is a note in the qlimax that is way off. And I think the kick loses its character when you pitch it so high.
The mix could also be improved.

So here is something for an intro maybe.


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@The RaveN I love this old Pitcher's style, and to be honest you did quite a nice job here! Idea is great, construction and details are there, everything sounds great together. The only bad point is the sound design, which is not as good as what Michel can do, but he's from another planet :p . _O_

@EMi Mixdown is not your cup of tea but as it's not mine either, I won't take it into account. That "psy" intro is bad tbh but there is something that I find pretty interesting in your track, it's the overall idea. For me, the best way to build a remix on this track is ""psystyle intro/regular qlimax/sidechained qlimax" which is pretty much what you've made.


Had some free time so I made a "harder" version of a psy track I made:
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Post by KRB-MP »

@EMi
Just like The RaveN said, the first part is a bit chaotic, the kick is a bit inapropriate for this part, but still sounds nice.
The climax is quite good, I like it
Pretty good track in my opinion

@The RaveN
I love the atmosphere of your track, this could be really nice as an intro for a track, well mixed and designed, good one !

@Asklepios
Even if it's a bit repetitive, this "harder" version of a psy track as you said, is a good one, keep it up


So here's my new one, kinda messy at some moments, but in my opinion way better than the previous one


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Post by xelnadu »

Been a while since I posted here, here we go:

The RaveN - Super Polyethylene - I really dig it! It reminds me of Dozer - The Legacy, which I think is still one of the best hardstyle tracks ever produced. Great crunch on those kicks, I really played it alot and I think you should finish it.

Asklepios - Welcome to the Jungle - not really into psytrance, but i like the hard punch overlayed on the psy kick. It's a bit repetitive, but don't take my feedback for granted, it's a different style that I don't really listen to.

KRB-MP - Night Time - lead sounds all right, but I think the kick's tail lenght is wrong. You see, when you repeat the kick in a triplet, it stacks the bassline and distrorts the next punch. Also I noticed that the percussion lfo speedup at 4:20 is kinda out of place (sounds offkey), and also I would use a hard snare for build-ups in hardstyle. The Intro/outro synth is nice. I see that you have some kick FX here and there, and the percussion (high hats overlapping the kick) are nice. It's a pretty standard structure, overall it sounds good but just cut the kick's tail when you repeat it in a sequence. Cheers!

Here is a combination of two or three song ideas I posted a while ago on soundcloud. Still working on it when I have some spare time:


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Post by EMi »

@Ynori the mix is so clean and the track itself is driving and sounds so powerful!
@krb-mp i think it needs sidechain, more frequencies to make the track sound filled and more transitions (like using a cutoff filter, sweep down / sweep up fx..)

the melody and the atmosphere is good , just work on the mix. the kicks also sound good : :)

@xelnadu i would make the kick more low in last half of the drop to dont make it repetitive. also the screech doesnt rly fit with that raw kick, imo better use a saw screech with pitch gain (to make it sound like a crow )

Heres the final version of my remix of Hardwell - Power

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@KRB-MP
The sounds you are using is very clean, but empty at times. Further the track is way to slow for me (not tempo wise _O_ ). I feel like listening to the same part for over 50 seconds without much of a changeup.

@xelnadu
Unfortunatly I can't hear your preview :(.

@EMi
Nice intro, starts of really well by building up to the drop. Atlhough I dislike the kick you are using the idea was defenitly not bad. Melody is clean and really catchy. Ourtro is pretty nasty, didn't see that coming. Maybe the best part of the track because of that. Defenitly an awesome song

I wish I had more time to produce stuff (started this in the summer when the actual vocals got realised lol) but I finally managed to get something going now:

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Subjective wrote:@KRB-MP
The sounds you are using is very clean, but empty at times. Further the track is way to slow for me (not tempo wise _O_ ). I feel like listening to the same part for over 50 seconds without much of a changeup.

@xelnadu
Unfortunatly I can't hear your preview :(.

@EMi
Nice intro, starts of really well by building up to the drop. Atlhough I dislike the kick you are using the idea was defenitly not bad. Melody is clean and really catchy. Ourtro is pretty nasty, didn't see that coming. Maybe the best part of the track because of that. Defenitly an awesome song

I wish I had more time to produce stuff (started this in the summer when the actual vocals got realised lol) but I finally managed to get something going now:
@Subjective

That sounds pretty cool, but I think the melody needs a bit more drive. Also your lead seems to be resonating around the 1k mark, maybe you could check it. But so far so good, keep it up!

Yesterday I started this remix for Phuture Noize - Hope. Any tips/comments so far?


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Post by NRx Hardstyle »

@xelnadu: Kinda out there, the fx is a bit dry, but sweet kickrolls, Also the tok is really nice.

@EMi: You gotta work on your mixdown, basically no low end punch, in the main kick, which makes it a bit flat. Also the vocals are way too much back in the mix, they should be more in the front imo. Otherwise pretty cool remix, I tried to make one myself, but got nowhere.

@Subjective; Really interesting melo, but the sound design is way too generic defqon. I'dd say more layers and a more distorted lead to make something that really stands out. Otherwise really good.

@Jellejansen1: The chorus lacks ambience, more reverb and delay! Kick needs some minor polishing but really good. Also sidechain the lead to get more pumping going, the leads could be more clear imo, but still just a layer more would be great! Keep up the good work, looking forward to hear the final mix!

Mashed some stuff around in my folders, did a new mixdown, and got this. Vocals are still a bit dry and way too much highs, but what ya think?

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