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dtz123
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Re: Track Snippets/Previews (Give feedback before posting yours)

Post by dtz123 »

@Hypernova Nice track man, pretty good all around, maybe the kick could use a bit more work, besides that keep up the good work man. :fist:

A little something i'm working on

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Neko
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Post by Neko »

@higgarn
The first vocals kinda need a little lowcut, its heavy on 100hz (hard guess, around that area atleast somewhere)
Nice reversebass, I miss the punch in the mix a bit though. Small treble boost on the punch only and youre fine. The snare in the second midintro on every second beat doesn't really fit your kick in my opinion. Although its a nice idea. The synth in the midintros could need a bit more variation, more effects and such, at least for my taste :)
The vocal cuts/loops in the mainbreak need to be more clean, you got small little breaks between those samples. Really nice idea with the track and high production quality in my opinion, sounds really solid, still I miss more details in there.

@hypanova
hi again :+
Still missing low frequencies from 0:50 on. But as for the rest I wrote to your older version, you fixed everything. And now it does sound way better. The anticlimax is really good, awesome screech, nice kickrolls. Nothing to add there. The drop with your melody I'm still not 100% sure, melody and kick doesn't go well together that much in your case. I mean its alright, if not even more than just alright, just maybe try some kickrolls in there too or anything to get more uniqueness and variation in it. Maybe thats the key i don't know.
regarding what dtz123 said to your kick, well I see what he means. The punch has this typical Ncrypta/D-Sturb kinda feeling and I really love it, but the tail doesn't seem to have much going on besides the subpart. Maybe try distorting it slighty more without touching the punch or something.

@dtz123
The mixdown seems to be kinda muddy unfortunately, kick is huge though. Awesome work on sound design and screech. The screech in your second drop sounds a bit thin and maybe needs more reverb/delay, sounds slightly dry. Other than that, awesome stuff. Sounds like you're producing for a long time already big ups!
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Started this morning with this one, first testmix done now. Let me know what you think of it, ears are tired and maybe its just an ugly mess I cant tell.
/edit: did a second testmix, too many mistakes in the first one
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Daisuke
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Post by Daisuke »

@Neko: VERY NICE =D
Just make the leadsound in the mainpart a bit louder (Can't hear it pretty well)^^
The rest is just awesome (besides the fact that I'm not a big fan of that "wannabe HC/Raw Kick :p )

@dtz123: Like I said before I'm not a fan of this kinf of kicks.
I won't give foodback couse it wouldn't help that much^^

Worked on this little thing^^
Climax is as good as finished ;)
Stay mad^^

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The RaveN
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Post by The RaveN »

Daisuke wrote:@Neko: VERY NICE =D
Just make the leadsound in the mainpart a bit louder (Can't hear it pretty well)^^
The rest is just awesome (besides the fact that I'm not a big fan of that "wannabe HC/Raw Kick :p )

@dtz123: Like I said before I'm not a fan of this kinf of kicks.
I won't give foodback couse it wouldn't help that much^^

Worked on this little thing^^
Climax is as good as finished ;)
The snare in that we-will-we-will-rock-you-rhythm is really weak IMO.

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NRx Hardstyle
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Post by NRx Hardstyle »

@Datsuke: Awesome atmospere, but your kick needs a bit more power
@DTZ: Whoa, that distortion on the lead and kick, really amazing! Keep it up its going to be really big when finished properly!

My latest track thats probably never going to be done;

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kauchris
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Post by kauchris »

@Daisuke
This is a really epic melody. The kick fits really good with the bright sound and melody. Keep it up! :)

@NRx Hardstyle
Maybe the track is finished right now? :p
I like the short kick in this Track.
Did you tried some short choir sounding plugs between some parts the track?
Like it :)

I made a remix of a Track from a well known hardstyle/jumpstyle producer. I his Track was released about 2010.
Do you know this track and who he is? :)
The second part is a litte test. just listen to it :P


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Post by Soundphase »

@kauchris first melody is cool and flows pretty well with that kick, think the last part hits better than the 2nd part


this is a homage to earlier styles dating back to 2006, tell me what you think and please let me know if you have any complaints
Purpose, thou art the compass.

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dhamiri_k
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Post by dhamiri_k »

@soundphase - the screech is nice one, could be nice with a bit stutter at the tapestop effect part of the screech
@kauchris - the kick is a bit bouncy, the vocal i remember from D-Block & S-Te-Fan - Peace At Last but the 2nd is really nice imo.



My track using recently give away melody by Anklebreaker :D
Hi I'm Dhamiri-K ;D

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Post by Soundphase »

@dharmiri_blurrboy has that cool hardstyle flow similar to the tracks in 2008, but I do not like the sliding notes in the melody (personal thing)

completely reworked my outro, I'm done with this now
Last edited by Soundphase on 22 Sep 2016, 23:17, edited 8 times in total.
Purpose, thou art the compass.

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NRx Hardstyle
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Post by NRx Hardstyle »

@Dhamiri : Great energy and flow in the track, great work! I think you have a bit too much highs, and lack a bit of lows, but otherwise great!

@Soundphase: Really good flow, kick sounds full and bouncy! The screech lacks a bit reverb imo


Gonna release this friday or saturday, Im just looking for some final feedback

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