The melody thread (Give feedback before posting yours)
- Tragedy1191
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Re: The melody thread (Give feedback before posting yours)
@krystal Your landscape track is legit! Can definitely picture that at a festival. Same with twisted sun, but the landscape is the favorite.
My lead isn't mastered or anything, just exported raw out of production so volume may be low. I like designing more of the older style
My lead isn't mastered or anything, just exported raw out of production so volume may be low. I like designing more of the older style
@Krystaal - Nice atmosphere and Code Black'ish lead 
@Tragedy1191 - Has an oldschool feeling, but some places are really random... Try to put it under scale and proper chord sequence... I know that it is somewhen hard, but you should learn this asap
My midnight delirium. Frontliner kick

@Tragedy1191 - Has an oldschool feeling, but some places are really random... Try to put it under scale and proper chord sequence... I know that it is somewhen hard, but you should learn this asap

My midnight delirium. Frontliner kick

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- battlejellyfish
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Krystal: chords are nice, but I don't think those upper notes fit.
Tragedy1191: that delay is strange. Otherwise there's nothing really wrong the melody, but I think you should make some variations.
Qobalt: some rhytimic issues I noticed, correct the notes
Inspirational wave together with NC kick.
Tragedy1191: that delay is strange. Otherwise there's nothing really wrong the melody, but I think you should make some variations.
Qobalt: some rhytimic issues I noticed, correct the notes

Inspirational wave together with NC kick.
@convicted really like the second part of the melody
first part could do with more variation imo. nice lead
@Qobalt its ok but its missing something
I tried a hardtrance/hardstyle melody im not the best at producing.made a reverse base for it and quicky made this snippet its not a track.


@Qobalt its ok but its missing something
I tried a hardtrance/hardstyle melody im not the best at producing.made a reverse base for it and quicky made this snippet its not a track.
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Hi there ,
I just made his melody yesterday. its not perfect, but my question :
The melody is mad in note F5 in the. Now my kick is in F1. f i put this kick uder the melody t sound like sh..
Anyone got a tip on ho to set that kick right on this melody?
greez and thanx
I just made his melody yesterday. its not perfect, but my question :
The melody is mad in note F5 in the. Now my kick is in F1. f i put this kick uder the melody t sound like sh..
Anyone got a tip on ho to set that kick right on this melody?
greez and thanx
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@Sashone has a good feeling, more like tech trance though
Rhytmic Dynamics, just pitch the tail - simple
something made for fun
Rhytmic Dynamics, just pitch the tail - simple
something made for fun
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- battlejellyfish
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Oh shit, I love these weird notes! Not sure, if you'd come up with a track including this melody, but I'd definitely have a listen to thatSoundphase wrote:@nRx sounds fresh and interesting
@Krystaal that has a nice feel, like it
this melo isn't my style and made it just for fun, inspired by the insane dentist Dr. loboto

Simple, but I think it should work. Don't pay attention on the build-up, it's horrible

@the convicted
the build up is a bit long, but doesn't sound so bad
the melody does sound a bit too repetitive in my opnion tho.
but overall it sounds pretty good.
i really tried to improve on mixing for this one.
The "vocals" do need a bit more cleaning, but i wanted to know if i'm going in the right direction with the mixdown.
Edit: i noticed thah the reeverb plugin crashed while reopening the project, thats why it sounded dry in the first preview.
In this one, i managed to keep the reeverb.
the build up is a bit long, but doesn't sound so bad

the melody does sound a bit too repetitive in my opnion tho.
but overall it sounds pretty good.
i really tried to improve on mixing for this one.
The "vocals" do need a bit more cleaning, but i wanted to know if i'm going in the right direction with the mixdown.
Edit: i noticed thah the reeverb plugin crashed while reopening the project, thats why it sounded dry in the first preview.
In this one, i managed to keep the reeverb.
Zine-Wave, the melody is a little to simple. And some of your long notes sound like they're randomly placed.
Convicted, lovely summer feeling in that one. With the right sounds this could be great.
Made 2 melody's myself, not really sure which one i prefer.

Convicted, lovely summer feeling in that one. With the right sounds this could be great.
Made 2 melody's myself, not really sure which one i prefer.
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@zine-wave: just as aftershoq said, it lax a bit complexity, structure the melody up and add more notes.
@Aftershoq: link is dead, can you reupload?
Testing out a new supersaw technique and a older melo that I remade a couple of times
@Aftershoq: link is dead, can you reupload?
Testing out a new supersaw technique and a older melo that I remade a couple of times
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