Track Snippets/Previews (Give feedback before posting yours)

[AlphavibeZ]

Hi there.

I like the feeling of the Track RawnessUnited.
I'm not that much into Rawstyle but i think with an additional screech on top of the first,
you could make some more action in this part.
I hope i could help you with that

Now lets see if my preview is something, that you guys like. I hope so
I'm open for everthing.

Peace

I like the vibe of that melody. The synth sounds a bit thin to me though and the melody good use a bit variation. since it's just an early preview, I'm looking forward to see what you're making out of that !

[Djelusionz]

I hope you guys can see this private link ive been struggling with this track i know mixdown is not perfect but i just wanted to get some feedback.

please let me know!

[SCH]

You give feedback before you receive it.

[iampsych]

SCH you are my everyday hero

[SCH]

Awwwwh <3

[Djelusionz]

Hi there.

I like the feeling of the Track RawnessUnited.
I'm not that much into Rawstyle but i think with an additional screech on top of the first,
you could make some more action in this part.
I hope i could help you with that

Now lets see if my preview is something, that you guys like. I hope so
I'm open for everthing.

Peace

I like the vibe of that melody. The synth sounds a bit thin to me though and the melody good use a bit variation. since it's just an early preview, I'm looking forward to see what you're making out of that !

I really like the track man! I have been following your youtube for a little now. sounds like it is ready for mastering!

[SCH]

How will he be able to improve his track after reading your 'feedback'? Sorry if I'm harsh but it's necessary that you give the best possible feedback you have time and skill for.

[five-map]

@SoulofSound

It sounds nice, I would maybe either speed up how fast you're cycling through the chords (spend half the time on each one) or try to vary up your melody a bit.


@AlphavibeZ

Great track! Love the vibes in the melody, you've got a really full sound going. Good work.


So the thing I'm most looking for feedback on is the melody/feel of the song - I'm pretty happy with the sound, but I don't know if it really has a 'hardstyle' feel to it. I feel like it would best fit as a climax to an anthem-themed song (but does that just mean my melody feels a bit random and needs context?)

[RawnessUnited]

Hi there.

I like the feeling of the Track RawnessUnited.
I'm not that much into Rawstyle but i think with an additional screech on top of the first,
you could make some more action in this part.
I hope i could help you with that

Now lets see if my preview is something, that you guys like. I hope so
I'm open for everthing.

Peace

I like the vibe of that melody. The synth sounds a bit thin to me though and the melody good use a bit variation. since it's just an early preview, I'm looking forward to see what you're making out of that !

1 word: WOW. Amazing track mate. Keep on going like that. Great sound!!

[dhamiri_k]

im replying from a cyber cafe cause the connections in my house too slow right now and the cyber cafe's headphones kinda sucks also (sigh), but i try my best to give the best feedback.

@RawnessUnited - It's really nice man. imo if the screech get a little rougher like more distorted, it can turn out great. but too much can result it be chaotic like fishes didn't have enough air. i like it the way it is now. nice work.

@Alphavibez - like the intro man. although it's kinda quick. for me, from 0.27, it can start with bandpass/hipass filtered lead and bassline, and after 16 bars, repeat it with like it sounds now until the end of intro (but the way it works now, i think it is okay the way you put it). and for the climax, i like that summer vibes man. i see there are no rooms to improve you track better as is seems to be too great, good work

@five-map - the melody is nice, and a bit close to anthemic feeling. that lead is nice, if you add more chords (not too much), it could work more great. nice kick by the way.

@Soulofsound - i refered to your old feedback and new ones.
And i noticed that your new one compressions are quite good, except the kick at the end, it's a bit louder. try to maintain the compression by automating the compression (maybe the ratio/threshold, try adjust abit, not too much). I agree with Alphavibez about the lead. but anyways, keep it going.

@djelusionz - i can't give feedback since it's private. you can upload to zippyshare or youtube (for youtube : change the privacy settings to unlisted so only we whom have the youtube link had the chance to review your track.) Sorry.

Alright. my turn. But i'm in dilemma with the mid-intro, whether to keep it or change it. but hope you guys enjoy.
Here we go!!