Continued my track called 'Dementia':
Still struggling with the triplet-part...
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battlejellyfish
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SourceOfDistortion: dark kick, I like it, but don't need that 'happy' synth in your track, if you understand what I'm talking about
Continued my track called 'Dementia':
Still struggling with the triplet-part...
Continued my track called 'Dementia':
Still struggling with the triplet-part...
@SourceofDistortion: Really nice kick, but I concur with Paralletic with the happy synth 
@Parallectic: Why can't I listen to your track I wonder Stupid Zippyshare, I'll come back later.
Here comes my holiday work
@Parallectic: Why can't I listen to your track I wonder
Stupid Zippyshare, I'll come back later.Here comes my holiday work
@ Apothecary, i love it, the vocals are top notch!
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LiamChristopherShenk
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@Shrapnel nice vocals in there Nikkita right?
finally has a kick! tell me what you think
Nikkita right?finally has a kick! tell me what you think
The quality of the sound is nice Crank 
the kick sounds quite good, but its like its not as frontal as some other sounds :/
Love the atmospheric feel the pluck gives and the air-ish pad.
Overall though there are a few things that ruin it, IMO the clap is too loud and out of place with EQ and the vocal could be louder to be clearer.
The kick lacks drive to the mix, its there but thats it, I see many producers making great songs with below standard kicks, try making it with stereo and dual layering and distorting differently and panning the distortion may help with getting a nicer kick!!
8/10
Here is the second track of the 2-part E.P Me and Brian are working on, so far its like a couple of hours work with an idea already built from previous attempts.
Hope you all like it and feedzbackz
the kick sounds quite good, but its like its not as frontal as some other sounds :/ Love the atmospheric feel the pluck gives and the air-ish pad.
Overall though there are a few things that ruin it, IMO the clap is too loud and out of place with EQ and the vocal could be louder to be clearer.
The kick lacks drive to the mix, its there but thats it, I see many producers making great songs with below standard kicks, try making it with stereo and dual layering and distorting differently and panning the distortion may help with getting a nicer kick!!
8/10
Here is the second track of the 2-part E.P Me and Brian are working on, so far its like a couple of hours work with an idea already built from previous attempts.
Hope you all like it and feedzbackz
Ignorance is bliss
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Bass Frequency
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WOW, that's really really professional. Have you gone to uni for music production? Or have you simply learnt by yourself. When did you start?
But yeah, absolutely fantastic, I'm keen for a full version
Here's mine, been working on this for AGES because I ended up not liking the kicks and such. Finally fixed everything up and it's done. Tell me what you think
WOW, that's really really professional. Have you gone to uni for music production? Or have you simply learnt by yourself. When did you start?
But yeah, absolutely fantastic, I'm keen for a full version
Here's mine, been working on this for AGES because I ended up not liking the kicks and such. Finally fixed everything up and it's done. Tell me what you think
http://soundcloud.com/bass-frequency
Blutonium Boy wrote:To make it clear, with Drumazon, Logic Pro and a good signal analisis tool like SCHOPE, it is easy to build and rebuild almost every kick!
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To be perfectly honest, it doesn't really sound scary at all. Reminds me of christmas. The seems a little muddy, however the leads are nice, although a bit thin. Try picking darker notes.
To be perfectly honest, it doesn't really sound scary at all. Reminds me of christmas. The seems a little muddy, however the leads are nice, although a bit thin. Try picking darker notes.
http://soundcloud.com/bass-frequency
Blutonium Boy wrote:To make it clear, with Drumazon, Logic Pro and a good signal analisis tool like SCHOPE, it is easy to build and rebuild almost every kick!
paahhh
Great kick! Melody is still kinda positive 
Not hardstyle, some chill dnb track from me, still kinda not one in piece... lots of variations... I think I need to sort things out and make it all in one piece hehe... but feel free to take a peak
Great kick!
Melody is still kinda positive Not hardstyle, some chill dnb track from me, still kinda not one in piece... lots of variations... I think I need to sort things out and make it all in one piece hehe... but feel free to take a peak
i see you with my x-ray