Can you guys give me some feedback?

[Ilidien]

Hi!

I've been working on this track for a bit too long now and I can't really figure out what I should do.
I would love for some of you to listen to it with a "fresh" mind and point me in the right direction.

Please be as harsh as you think you need to be, I don't get very far if you're not telling me your honest opinion because you want to be nice.



Also happy new year to all of you!