Freemasons - Love On My Mind (Lucas K Remix) - Free Download

[ljk32]

Hey guys, not exactly sure if I was supposed to post here or not, but the 'Track Reviews' section is for works in progress, and this is complete, so I think this is where it goes. Anyway, it's my first complete track and it'd be awesome to hear what anyone thinks of it. If anyone actually likes it enough to download it, you can haha.

[VanillaFace]

Dude, this is really, really nice. I like it a LOT! Keep it up!

[ljk32]

Haha thanks so much man, means a lot.

[ljk32]

Anyone else think anything of it?

[SCH]

Nicely done dude! I'd love these vocals with a 90's house beat

[ljk32]

Thanks so much man, I appreciate it.

[Jonas]

Love it man! That beat is nice to hear, fits good with the vocals/piano! Good job!

[ljk32]

Wow, thanks so much dude!

[ljk32]

Any other feedback?

[Doeneralii]

I completly agree to what the others say (nice vocals, good quality etc), its well composed, cool structure, so I will continue with things to make the song even better :
The hats which play with the "climax" arent clear enough to me, the drum sounds a bit too hollow and deep to me - for me it is too strong for this soft song. Also I dont really like that the song is completely driven by the vocals, thats also the way Pop-Music works But if you like it - and others seem, too - its fine
Ahh : The synth in the break could be a bit more cut off and could use some more volume then -> better rise, better impact The Snare before the climax is too loud for me (a bit) and to conclude nicely : pretty piano, a bit more body!
BUT : these are only advanced and subjective aspects which I personally would change, maybe you change something

edit : where are the vocals from? They are absolutly gorgeous!