It's far from finished. You tail has no character, it doesn't cruch or anything. I sounds like you put one distortion and called it a day. You should distort it more and play with EQ, lots of EQ. Go watch tutorial on youtube to understand what you have to do (Frontliner and Audiofreq ones are great to begin with).Undecided wrote:Snip
Same goes for your punch, it sounds like a lightly distorted 909 punch, work on it more until it sounds good.
And more importantly, compare it to professional kicks, you'll directly hear what is wrong.