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prwenom wrote:@Ninomaal sick-sick! ;) like! :D

hali :D this is my first hardcore product(just intro):


waiting for feedbacks! ;)
sounds pretty decent on my rokits :p
love to hear it with a lead/vocal on it...

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@Ernert, I like the idea of the tracks, but they sure like work. I really like the idea of Bum Dem remixes build-up :) dunno what to say about other one. You need more sound design and work on your build and hooks.


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@Nekasrof sounds really cool, first lead can be improved to be a bit harder, sounds cheesy, but that's pretty good man :dance:

My first try at producing hardcore, and to be honest, I get some pleasure doing it :+
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@Asklepios, hooooooly shit you have no idea how much I love this _O_ _O_ this is your style, which is why it's so interesting, it's original stuff!! finish this ASAP!! _O_ _O_

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Nekasrof wrote:@Asklepios, hooooooly shit you have no idea how much I love this _O_ _O_ this is your style, which is why it's so interesting, it's original stuff!! finish this ASAP!! _O_ _O_
Thx man, still working on it, I need time to discover how to produce hardcore, all the rules, etc. But I got a longer preview, just made the second part but not really sure about it ^^



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Asklepios wrote:I need time to discover how to produce hardcore, all the rules, etc.
This is where you'll go wrong. Fuck the rules, or whatever's the 'standard' in regards to Hardcore production, just do what you're doing, it sounds fine as it is. The only thing following set procedures will do is give you generic, piece-of-crap tracks. However, of course, if you don't want your stuff to be unique, ignore what I mentioned about fucking the rules.

In terms of the track, I assume you'd fix up the mix significantly at the end of the composition stage, but if not, I'll tell you now anyway - the mix is quite messy, the elements in the track need to sit nicely together, it seems as though the lead and kick are conflicting. Also, I'd personally remove the glidey synth in the main climax, but of course that's up to you. However, this is quite well-made, nice job man.

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ljk32 wrote:
Asklepios wrote:I need time to discover how to produce hardcore, all the rules, etc.
This is where you'll go wrong. Fuck the rules, or whatever's the 'standard' in regards to Hardcore production, just do what you're doing, it sounds fine as it is. The only thing following set procedures will do is give you generic, piece-of-crap tracks. However, of course, if you don't want your stuff to be unique, ignore what I mentioned about fucking the rules.
You haven't understand me, it was not to produce some generic stuffs cause I like to have my own style, my own touch, but it's just to know the basics.
ljk32 wrote:In terms of the track, I assume you'd fix up the mix significantly at the end of the composition stage, but if not, I'll tell you now anyway - the mix is quite messy, the elements in the track need to sit nicely together, it seems as though the lead and kick are conflicting.
To be honest, I can say that you have just discovered why I've never finished/sold a track, cause I am not really good for these stuffs, I try to work on it but I guess I don't have a good equipment to do it (headphones and a labtop, which is lagging as hell xD), the only thing I love is working on sound design and ideas. I recognize that I need help for these things :D

btw, thx for your review and I will work on it again.
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Nekasrof, sounds cool but i don't really hear Nosferatu. :D He has such a variation in style. :)

Asklepios, sounds pretty nice only the kick really sounds hardstylish in my opinion. ;)
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@Asklepios, I'm loving it even more. Maybe work on those lead synths, add a more detuned and stronger osced supersaw under it? The second melody could be better with a little note changing and better synth. The kicks are original though _O_


I took a snippet of nw Battlefield 4 trailer, and found out that it's an awesome crossbreed-like bassdrum. So here's the end result, should I keep on working on it?

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Can't say i like it cause it's not my cup of tea nekasrof. :)

Changed the melody of my latest track.
The flow of the previous one was just not there yet. :)

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