@KLAUS, i'm missing some layers and reverb on the lead, and the progressions sounds a bit random at some point but overall it's a good start!
Tried to make somthing similar to Devin Wild ..
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@Krystal:
really dope atmosphere you got there, i’m missing a bit of buil-up. didn’t expect the drop already. kick sounds a bit low in volume compared to the rest of the track. other than that great concept, great sounds/leads.
@dawed1999
structurewise I think it’s good, sound wise there is room for progress, lead’s sound really thin. Layering/ stereospreading/ Reverb could help. I also think you’re way to high pitched with the melody, especially in the 2nd drop.
@KLAUS
Your leadsound is a bit to much detuned in my opinion, nice full sounding kick, It’s a bit flat overall reverb can help making the leadsound more full.
My track:
really dope atmosphere you got there, i’m missing a bit of buil-up. didn’t expect the drop already. kick sounds a bit low in volume compared to the rest of the track. other than that great concept, great sounds/leads.
@dawed1999
structurewise I think it’s good, sound wise there is room for progress, lead’s sound really thin. Layering/ stereospreading/ Reverb could help. I also think you’re way to high pitched with the melody, especially in the 2nd drop.
@KLAUS
Your leadsound is a bit to much detuned in my opinion, nice full sounding kick, It’s a bit flat overall reverb can help making the leadsound more full.
My track:
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Gunner1001
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@ perceptor , i like the track idea , and the quality is good
some feedback what i prefer to hear 1:00 it starts to get silently , but the basslead from here is maby a idea to give some extra suprises ? to make it more catchy .
also the build up from 1:00 till 2:10 maby can have some extra diversion , maby a extra lead to build it up more litterly up up up.
the second build up / break , maby can use a alternative melody than the first one ? , moving some note`s up instead of leaving them the same as the first build up .
and use those changed notes to finish the last qlimax .
for the rest it sounds pretty pro to me
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now this is my first post , maby i used some terms that make you guys laugh
but im producing some things also . and lately i feel im getting on to something how it should sound like .
there for i made 2 remixes , wich i want to present to this audience .
looking forward for some real feedback and tips and tricks , and overal verdicts
1 = remix of sensation white 2003 anthem . in my opinion it sounds finished. how i ment to make it sound with remixing it .
2 = and the second one is tom walker leave a light one ( my first track that i thought like : this is it , this is what i want to get to when remixing a excisting song into a hardstyle track )
some feedback what i prefer to hear 1:00 it starts to get silently , but the basslead from here is maby a idea to give some extra suprises ? to make it more catchy .
also the build up from 1:00 till 2:10 maby can have some extra diversion , maby a extra lead to build it up more litterly up up up.
the second build up / break , maby can use a alternative melody than the first one ? , moving some note`s up instead of leaving them the same as the first build up .
and use those changed notes to finish the last qlimax .
for the rest it sounds pretty pro to me
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now this is my first post , maby i used some terms that make you guys laugh
but im producing some things also . and lately i feel im getting on to something how it should sound like .
there for i made 2 remixes , wich i want to present to this audience .
looking forward for some real feedback and tips and tricks , and overal verdicts
1 = remix of sensation white 2003 anthem . in my opinion it sounds finished. how i ment to make it sound with remixing it .
2 = and the second one is tom walker leave a light one ( my first track that i thought like : this is it , this is what i want to get to when remixing a excisting song into a hardstyle track )
@ Krystal
Thanks for the feedback. I can work with that.
I agree with perceptor that it needs more buildup to the climax, but it got stuck in my head for a while. So I should definitely continue.
@dawed1999
Your kick is very nice, and I like the track as well. Good melody. only thing, not very fond of the leadsound, maybe more layers to make it a more full sound.
@perceptor
Thanks for your feedback.
Nice track man, good job! The whole arrangement is how it should be in my opinion. You have variation from first to second climax. The only thing is the volume; it's a bit low i think, perhaps it's not mastered yet..?
Here is a new track of mine: Summertime
Thanks for the feedback. I can work with that.
I agree with perceptor that it needs more buildup to the climax, but it got stuck in my head for a while. So I should definitely continue.
@dawed1999
Your kick is very nice, and I like the track as well. Good melody. only thing, not very fond of the leadsound, maybe more layers to make it a more full sound.
@perceptor
Thanks for your feedback.
Nice track man, good job! The whole arrangement is how it should be in my opinion. You have variation from first to second climax. The only thing is the volume; it's a bit low i think, perhaps it's not mastered yet..?
Here is a new track of mine: Summertime
@KLAUS
Your kick is really good. Overall i think your sound design is alright but could use more of that PHAT, for my personal taste more high frequencies too. I'm not a big fan of the melody it got boring after a little bit though i like your synth. The screech is not big enough, needs to be louder too. Keep it coming.
After quite a long break here is something i've been working on. What do you think?
Your kick is really good. Overall i think your sound design is alright but could use more of that PHAT, for my personal taste more high frequencies too. I'm not a big fan of the melody it got boring after a little bit though i like your synth. The screech is not big enough, needs to be louder too. Keep it coming.
After quite a long break here is something i've been working on. What do you think?
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Gunner1001
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@Gunner1001 i love your track
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Gunner1001
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Wow @ F8
realy oldschool vibe going on there in the begin , and also in the continues parts ,
i am big fan of of this style !
some feedback perhaps
the little silcence part at 1:30 , cool , but maby do more with that silence , maby a snibbet from the qlimax to put in there ? and in the rest of the silent parts ?
the part before the qlimax starts , the melody , with also the silence moments in it , maby put another lead softlyinto the background to be continues ?
the qlimax itself is to much detuned in my opinion though , you need to rearrange it , get it more straight , and in tune .
for the rest , make the qlimax more attractive , put the melody wich i mentioned earlier , also behind the whole track , let some bits of the begin , join the qlimax .
make this qlimax Fat !
Keep it going !
maby some other project i have been doing .
this goes before i started to make real stuf
i also again love doing remixes
making good original songs , even more good ( atleast thats the idea )
and i know this is the hardstyle part but , even hardstyle people play some hardcore every now and than to close thins down
and a track ( with the voices of game of thrones )
looking forward to some feedback or verdicts
realy oldschool vibe going on there in the begin , and also in the continues parts ,
i am big fan of of this style !
some feedback perhaps
the little silcence part at 1:30 , cool , but maby do more with that silence , maby a snibbet from the qlimax to put in there ? and in the rest of the silent parts ? the part before the qlimax starts , the melody , with also the silence moments in it , maby put another lead softlyinto the background to be continues ?
the qlimax itself is to much detuned in my opinion though , you need to rearrange it , get it more straight , and in tune .
for the rest , make the qlimax more attractive , put the melody wich i mentioned earlier , also behind the whole track , let some bits of the begin , join the qlimax .
make this qlimax Fat !
Keep it going !
maby some other project i have been doing .
this goes before i started to make real stuf
i also again love doing remixes
making good original songs , even more good ( atleast thats the idea
) and i know this is the hardstyle part but
, even hardstyle people play some hardcore every now and than to close thins down and a track ( with the voices of game of thrones
) looking forward to some feedback or verdicts
@Gunner1001
Ok so since you've got few tracks that are actually in the same spirit I'll try to give a general review (except for the hardcore one, since I don't pêrsonnaly listen to hardcore I won't be able to give feedbacks on it)
Let's start, I pretty like the fact that you're trying to bring back some kind of old school spirit in your tracks, I pretty miss that time.
My first question is did Youtube fucked up the quality of the tracks ? Well, I had quality issues with Youtube from time to time so I won't speak about it
Your tracks are good in general, but you need to work more on the transitions, from time to time the melody brutally stops or stuff like this and that could be disapointing.
Your kicks are good, excepts it needs a bit more punch, but sounds good in my opinion
Sometimes the notes from the melodies aren't following the general atmosphere made with the pads (when there's one), try to adjust this (I'll personnaly keep the original melody and work on the pads instead)
Add a bit more reeverb and/or deelay, it could embetter this oldschool spirit that is appreciated by a lot of nostalgics fans !
In general your tracks are good, need a bit more of work on the mastering imo
(Before reviewing the following track, keep in mind that I wanted to make a long and progressive track, so it's a bit repetitive but that was the goal)
So, since I've not posted for a while, I'm showing you my newest work, I need to work more on the mastering, but I need feedbacks on what's good and what's wrong with it, what should I keep, what should I work more on, and maybe, what should I delete.
I hope you'll like this trancy atmosphere !
Ok so since you've got few tracks that are actually in the same spirit I'll try to give a general review (except for the hardcore one, since I don't pêrsonnaly listen to hardcore I won't be able to give feedbacks on it)
Let's start, I pretty like the fact that you're trying to bring back some kind of old school spirit in your tracks, I pretty miss that time.
My first question is did Youtube fucked up the quality of the tracks ? Well, I had quality issues with Youtube from time to time so I won't speak about it
Your tracks are good in general, but you need to work more on the transitions, from time to time the melody brutally stops or stuff like this and that could be disapointing.
Your kicks are good, excepts it needs a bit more punch, but sounds good in my opinion
Sometimes the notes from the melodies aren't following the general atmosphere made with the pads (when there's one), try to adjust this (I'll personnaly keep the original melody and work on the pads instead)
Add a bit more reeverb and/or deelay, it could embetter this oldschool spirit that is appreciated by a lot of nostalgics fans !
In general your tracks are good, need a bit more of work on the mastering imo
(Before reviewing the following track, keep in mind that I wanted to make a long and progressive track, so it's a bit repetitive but that was the goal)
So, since I've not posted for a while, I'm showing you my newest work, I need to work more on the mastering, but I need feedbacks on what's good and what's wrong with it, what should I keep, what should I work more on, and maybe, what should I delete.
I hope you'll like this trancy atmosphere !