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Post by EMi »

@Neko powerful, sick kicks, driving song... nothing bad to say honestly. it sounds pretty good on my headphones, so i guess that the mix is good too. just personal taste, if you want to definetly kill it, have you thought about do the 3rd drop "psy" adding some bassline? it would fill imo! good job man!

@Subjetive dude! that sounds sick! im listening that on headphones and i think the kick is a bit quiet, thats easy to fix, the rest its amazing imo! good job!! you should finish that and send it to Euphoric Hardstyle or smt :D

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Post by NRx Hardstyle »

@Subjective: sounds really nice, lots of reverb and delay! Kick could do with a small boost in the tok to cut through the mix a bit more but other than that! Also I think the melo could be more fleshed out with a few more layers.

@Neko: As usual awesome fx, kicks and stuff ;)

@Dawed1999: Extensive feedback posted but my 2cents; Everything lacks reverb, lead needs layers. I do like the melo tho, also the vocals fit almost perfctly. Noticed a few small mistakes here and there but overall pretty good.

@EMi: Kick is a bit off on the highest notes not correctly pitched. The lead needs more layers, melo not that bad tho. Sounds still pretty good, mixdown could use a bit more work as well.


Here is something wierd I've been working on, silent part are reserved for vocals ;)


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Post by KRB-MP »

@NRx Hardstyle
This is a nice sounding track, well mastered, I pretty like the short "breaks", they're correctly placed (as you said it will be filled with lyrics, can't wait to ear that)
i pretty like how you play with sidechaining, the only thing that is strange in my opinion is the kick used in the climax, well, it doesn't fit with the climax atmosphere, and the lead itself (in my opinion)
The sounds are clear, I don't have anything to add :)

Ok, since I didn't post for a while, here is just a preview (pre-intro + intro part)
I'll work harder on the kickroll, I'm just posting this to show you the general atmosphere of the track (and also the mastering work)


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Post by Krystaal »

@KRM-MP, The build up is cool but i think you should rework your intro synth with a more screechy or distorted one, use some saturations on it, your kick drum is lacking punch and the tail as well needs to be more present but the overall idea is cool!

@NRx-Hardstyle, i actually really liked the overall, mixdown seems nice, good job man!

Heres my try :

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Post by KRB-MP »

@Krystaal

I pretty like the lead, also these small pianos notes behind the melody are making a more dreamy atmosphere that sounds pretty cool ! Well done !

So here's Hatred final version, and don't worry, the screechy part comes in the outro ;)


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Post by EMi »

@KRB-MP: The kick sounds weak and i think like the tail is too short.How do you pitch it?
You should work on it. Also i miss some strings, arpegios, voices... on the background, sounds too dry in my opinion.
Try to add also some sweep up/ sweep down in the build up to the drop for better transitions, and use a filter to cutoff frequencies of the lead for example for a better buildup.

Heres my track. Hope you guys like!

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Post by Wavelength »

Very rough 1st take of a new idea I had, any thoughts? I know theres timing tweaking involved (working on my first song here :P )



EDIT: song above I really like, good atmosphere and flow to it, nvm mine its not nearly ready yet
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Post by Krystaal »

@Emi, The whole idea is good, you shoud check as well the stereo, add some supersaw with shitload of reverb and compress the reverb. if you are using stereo plugins, quit them as you can have phase issues.. use the pan to seperate each sound/layers to their room space, will sounds better i guess :p

Heres some wip from me..

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Post by The RaveN »

@Krystaal

Maybe a riser before the climax?

Everything else is beautiful :D

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