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@SNOOPP the track sound ace, but the vocals jiggle, sounds like over-compression, also I find the kick and lead not really seeming to suit one another, the crunch on the kick doesn't sound quite right. still cool though (H)

@butterprickol sounds pretty sick man, the lead needs to be a tad phatter though, try layering it with deeper, but bright supersaws, and throwing it all on a bus and compressing it so all the layers sound like one. Other than that, it's pretty sweet- dig the kick.

@EMi concept is cool, but it doesn't seem to really flow from one part to another like a rawstyle track should, it feels a bit like fade in fade out- try and add some transient to your kick, and a bit of distortion to your lead- other than that pretty cool man

(H) been like a year since i posted, let alone actually made music. i thought i would use one of my favourite people's voice in my track... Noam Chomsky- it's just the intro- how does it sound? I normally don't do intros like this since I prefer euphoric intros aaaaa


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@Asklepios

cant give feedback man sorry... sounds pretty damn good here. i like the drive and it got me movin so.

@Buffelstoot

The track itself ( the idea is pretty good ) like the vibe and the feeling you are bringing over with it.
mixing wise i think there are some things that can be improved. for example it sounds a little muffled. it could be clearer also the kick is not powerfull enough its good but can be better ;). that vocal i have also in a project :P but doesnt matter. its a whole different track im making :P

@The raven
i like the style. but the TAK/PUNCH the crunch could be alot more prominent. as in i want to hear that sound better its now underneath and hard to hear. the melody is pretty nice man love that groove.

@EMI

mixing wise not there is alot to be done. also the lead sound i dont like but that can be taste. the kick has to much low mids and needs less of that and more sub imo in general the kick need alot of work.

sorry if i missed someone but it would get very long :P

today i started this :

I wanted to know if i am on the right track mixing wise...

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Post by Buffelstoot »

@The RaveN: Choirs and angel voices come from a kontakt library! :)
Thanx for the comments!

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@Greentechnl: Intro sounds good and pretty cool as well, The buildup is a bit here and there, melo could be more complex. Kick sounds decent. Lead could be worked on more layers and a bit more reverb. Otherwise prettty good start for a track!

Here is something that I've been making for way too long


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Post by drasticsense »

Hi to everyone here, im a new member from Italy :)

@greentechnnl: Interesting Track, but your Kicks are too short. At the very end of the Beat the Kicks is kinda interrupted. Your kick has to be move till the beginning of the next beat to sound full. Maybe there is a lack of low-end.

@NRx Hardstyle: Really cool nice sounding melody and transitions. The Lead sounds nice as well !
The Kick is ok but sound a little bit dull. I have actually compared to other tracks and it seems to me that the Kick is too loud in low-end compared to others. It occupies to much space within the low-end. You need to reduce the bass and bring the mid's and eventually the Hi's to the front. Otherwise i have nothing to criticize. Nice job dude.

So actually im a Hardcore Producer. I hope you can help me.

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Post by EMi »

@greentechnl: at the moment its cool. post the full track when you got it for a better review! :)

@nrx: as always, great job. all i can say is that if you improve a bit more you can reach a place in some label or something. the song has so much rythm and as i said in a comment time ago, the melody reminds me an atmozfears track, i really like it :)

heres something i made while vacations (i dont have my speakers so idk if the mixing is clear)

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Post by NRx Hardstyle »

@EMi: I actually like that kick, but the pitching needs a bit tweaking there is no pump in the low end when you pitch it. Melo could do with some more variation. Lead is a bit muddy and needs a bit sharpening, ex some minor vibrato and whatnot IMO. Otherwise a pretty cool sounding kinda atmospheric kinda track. Also you got a nice kick pattern.

Alright I've tried to make this track work properly, I do feel like it needs some sort of vocals but cant put my finger on what kind or where to find them. Also Im thinking of redoing the midintro, but I'll see what I can actually do :D

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Post by kauchris »

@EMi
The claps of the buildup are a bit too much in the background. The kick sound clear but got a really annoying hum sound in the low hat the highest pitched kick. Maybe you should try to pitch the kick on some parts of the track on other keys cause it sounds sometimes to linear. But anyway, keep it up and try yourself out :-)

@NRx Hardstyle
Really like the sound and the beat of the "screech". Buildup and climax are great. It's not a kind of "mainstream" kick you used, thats a good thing for me ;-) Maybe you could add some highs for the claps. Overall, hands up (H)

Soundcloud and Clyp are limiting my Track ... need a better RMS ;-)
Anyway here is a preview of my track I'm working on. I idea is to do a gently silent Track with a pumping climax and some instrumental parts. I need to chop the vocals a bit clearer and tweak a bit on the leads. But thats the next job for this track. Just listen.
Yea, thats it ;-)


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Post by NRx Hardstyle »

@Kauchris: Kick needs a bit of a boost in the mids and some minor crunch in the tok, really good otherwise! The lead is a bit bland, but has potential with a bit more distortion and highs.

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@NRx Hardstyle : I'm surprised how you make those beautiful melodies in combination with the screech synth
You also you played well with the kick breaks
I have 4000 hiphop acapellas for you want 2pac , 50cent All hip hop performers i have also early house vocals
If you need the files ? i wil send them to you

Here are my 3 new tracks :



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