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[The RaveN]

@Netris

That reverse bass is in a wrong tone. You could also work on that kick. The transition to the piano is a bit abrupt. The mixdown is also very bad and there is a general lack of elements. The lead could be a bit more layered. Also the reverb on the elements is a bit weak or wierd.

[Netris]

@Netris

That reverse bass is in a wrong tone.

That's what I don't understand, everything is on A# when I look at it...


Yeah, I'm working on that, but people haven't really reponded to what I posted so I don't really know how to improve. Not a complaint here, just an observation.

Also the reverb on the elements is a bit weak or wierd.

What do yo mean by weird ? And by elements ?

[enslaver101]

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Aaarghh, my ears! The high end is too loud, namely in the intro fx and the lead. The reverse bass sounds fine to me though.

[The RaveN]

@Netris

That reverse bass is in a wrong tone.

That's what I don't understand, everything is on A# when I look at it...

I think your reverse bass is like two or one semitones too low.

Edit: I tried to pitch the reverse bass one semitone up and it sounds better. (Though it was transient pitching)

[Netris]

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Aaarghh, my ears! The high end is too loud, namely in the intro fx and the lead. The reverse bass sounds fine to me though.

I'll definitely need better headphones :/ It sounds fine on my end.

@Netris

That reverse bass is in a wrong tone.

That's what I don't understand, everything is on A# when I look at it...

I think your reverse bass is like two or one semitones too low.

Edit: I tried to pitch the reverse bass one semitone up and it sounds better. (Though it was transient pitching)

I'll try that, thanks.


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The mixdown is also very bad

Could you be a bit more specific ? I mean "your mixdown is bad" is not really constructive nor helpful. I'd like to improve, but just saying it's bad doesn't really help here.

You could also work on that kick.

Yeah, I'm working on that, but people haven't really responded to what I posted so I don't really know how to improve. Not a complaint here, just an observation.

Also the reverb on the elements is a bit weak or wierd.

What do yo mean by weird ? And by elements ? That's a bit vague.

[The RaveN]

@Netris

Sorry for not being specific. I just wanted to point out what you should focus on. There are tutorials that can explain these things much better than if I were to do it. The reverb was quiet and short. That's what I mean.

[butterprickol]

Snippet of an upcoming track of mine.

[mrcax5]

Snippet of an upcoming track of mine.

very driving kick, which I like, but the only thing here that's missing is the atmosphere or some kind of choir to fill in the sound. nice idea overall

[mrcax5]

here is something from me I'm working on atm, hope you like it

[Netris]

@Netris

Sorry for not being specific. I just wanted to point out what you should focus on. There are tutorials that can explain these things much better than if I were to do it. The reverb was quiet and short. That's what I mean.

Ok, thanks