. Listened to your track as well sounds good man, Nice melody and i like that chompy kick!
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@neko Cheers for that brilliant feedback . Listened to your track as well sounds good man, Nice melody and i like that chompy kick!
. Listened to your track as well sounds good man, Nice melody and i like that chompy kick!-
NRx Hardstyle
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@Neko; Sounds great, awesome lead, i just the kick progression in the melody goes so low that its wierdly pitched. Might be me though 
@Sashone; try it in 150 bpm and then cut out the orchesta away, add a few screeches and you have a pretty decent track! You are starting out great!
Trying to merge raw with hard, Im still working on the future melo for it
@Sashone; try it in 150 bpm and then cut out the orchesta away, add a few screeches and you have a pretty decent track! You are starting out great!
Trying to merge raw with hard, Im still working on the future melo for it
https://soundcloud.com/Exinfinium
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typhonmusic
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@nrx
i really like the weird sound that plays in triplets during the beginning of the clip. the kicks are pretty nice. both sound really clean and well-made, and the second one is really sick. the whole thing sounds like something a professional would make
@neko
i really like the way you used the vocals in the break. the melody is pretty nice, and all the different leads and screeches you used are really cool. your kicks are amazing
@sashone
i really like the break. i agree with neko though, you should edit the vocals a bit, and the kick in the buildup needs some editing too. maybe you could lower the bass at the beginning and then increase it over the course of the buildup. also, i think the kickrolls near the end come a bit too suddenly and they sound slightly out of place. i won't comment on the kick since you're not done with it. overall, i like the clip though, it really reminds me of the artists you mentioned. i hope you post it when you're done because i really want to hear it
i'll add a proper buildup later
i really like the weird sound that plays in triplets during the beginning of the clip. the kicks are pretty nice. both sound really clean and well-made, and the second one is really sick. the whole thing sounds like something a professional would make
@neko
i really like the way you used the vocals in the break. the melody is pretty nice, and all the different leads and screeches you used are really cool. your kicks are amazing
@sashone
i really like the break. i agree with neko though, you should edit the vocals a bit, and the kick in the buildup needs some editing too. maybe you could lower the bass at the beginning and then increase it over the course of the buildup. also, i think the kickrolls near the end come a bit too suddenly and they sound slightly out of place. i won't comment on the kick since you're not done with it. overall, i like the clip though, it really reminds me of the artists you mentioned. i hope you post it when you're done because i really want to hear it
i'll add a proper buildup later
Rawstyle/crossbreed/subground: https://soundcloud.com/demonic-messiah
Melodic HS: https://soundcloud.com/archangel-music-3
Melodic HS: https://soundcloud.com/archangel-music-3
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krip deejay
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@neko the vocals
In the break and what you done with sounds cool and really like the melody and your sound design
To nice work
Here is one I would love so feed back if any of you have time
... s-master-6
In the break and what you done with sounds cool and really like the melody and your sound design
To nice work
Here is one I would love so feed back if any of you have time
... s-master-6
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krip deejay
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@neko the vocals
In the break and what you done with sounds cool and really like the melody and your sound design
To nice work
Here is one I would love so feed back if any of you have time
... s-master-6
In the break and what you done with sounds cool and really like the melody and your sound design
To nice work
Here is one I would love so feed back if any of you have time
... s-master-6
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NRx Hardstyle
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@Typhoon; Im not really into your style, but the lead needs some sidechaining so it "pumps" a bit. Otherwise good progression 
@KripDeejay; You are off to a great start, work on the melody. You have a good buildup and vocals and a very clean mix. You also need to distort the screech part way more imo. Im looking forward when you release this.
Looking for a vocalist or vocals, track is nearly done
@KripDeejay; You are off to a great start, work on the melody. You have a good buildup and vocals and a very clean mix. You also need to distort the screech part way more imo. Im looking forward when you release this.
Looking for a vocalist or vocals, track is nearly done
https://soundcloud.com/Exinfinium
Check out my new Channelhttps://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXSnKw ... 5Ei4nhLklw
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@typhonmusic Leads nice and powerful but i think it drowns out the kick a bit imo. Nice melo also
'NRx Hardstyle Not my style, but like the transitions also that lead sound quite unique
so well done. think the intro kick could do with more power but thats just my tastes
This Is my Intro no where near finished went for a hardtrance sort of track. Still not done the mixdown
Eternal Silence
'NRx Hardstyle Not my style, but like the transitions also that lead sound quite unique
so well done. think the intro kick could do with more power but thats just my tastes
This Is my Intro no where near finished went for a hardtrance sort of track. Still not done the mixdown
Eternal Silence
@Nrx: Wow sounds really good man! It really sounds proffesional and i really can't think of any inprovements right now. Maybe a little more power in your kicks tail but that's it. Love your kickroll earlier in the topic BTW! Keep up the great work!
@Sashone: Although i'm not into the style of your song it really sounded fresh (cool sounddesign and all) but i think your panning your leads kind of weird. On my sounds system it sounds like it's moving from right to left over the lenght of the song. Could be my experience and as i said i'm not quite into your style so i'm not really able to give you feedback. Keep up the great work!
One of my tracks is in my opinion almost done, still working on the mixdown. Here it is and i'm ready for feedback!
@Sashone: Although i'm not into the style of your song it really sounded fresh (cool sounddesign and all) but i think your panning your leads kind of weird. On my sounds system it sounds like it's moving from right to left over the lenght of the song. Could be my experience and as i said i'm not quite into your style so i'm not really able to give you feedback. Keep up the great work!
One of my tracks is in my opinion almost done, still working on the mixdown. Here it is and i'm ready for feedback!
@Nrx: really solid tracks man, followed you on SC. great mix-down, and really cool sound-design, keep it up!
@climax: the attack of the kick sounds a bit harsh and and is all over the place. the lead is a bit WP/Rebourne-like, good job
my first ever track, I would really appreciate your honest opinion, thanks in advance
PS: turn on HD, (zippy can't really handle wave-quality?)
@climax: the attack of the kick sounds a bit harsh and and is all over the place. the lead is a bit WP/Rebourne-like, good job
my first ever track, I would really appreciate your honest opinion, thanks in advance
PS: turn on HD, (zippy can't really handle wave-quality?)