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[ASTARTAS]

@Neko : love the Idea, very interesting sounddesing + kick design i guess we germans tend to something "outstanding" ? keep it up ... ah ofcourse : COLLAB BRO ???
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Im a bit stuck right now with the mainpart / melody for my new project ... any idea wich is better or fits better ?
: thats the part i try the "new" melodys
: here is ... somehow the main intro idea incl the old break ... all HARDLY WIP !

[sabino]

@ ASTARTAS i know i should write something and post my things, but... i really dont know what i should say, lol, my productions are going very badly, so i cant say many things, but, the FRZT is pretty well until 0:50seg, i think the intro should stop there.

may i get something?

[ASTARTAS]

@Sabino : overall i would say you have an clear idea ... but its not very ... finished !? i guess you should try to glue the stuff a bit better together and work a bit more on the lowend of the kick because in the last "mainpart" it really sticks far in the background with the bottom, i cant judge the style because thats a taste thing and everyone likes something else, i would suggest : keep working on it and keep us updatet !

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Ofcourse ofcourse i remade the melody ... and overall presentation in the break :


what do you guys think about that version ?
thanks !

[sabino]

@ASTARTAS actually its not finished, but yesterday I was with doubt and didnt know if the idea was clear or confused about the "atmosphere" Im trying to pass, aaaaand... about the glue the stuff still is a big problem for me the same for the kick, but, ill work more and update my stuff, but i would like to receive "heavy criticism" if applicable, oftentimes im working and i dont know if its a good idea or not to continue working on that project.
About your new version, i dont what i should say(again,lol), you have nices fxs, fxs what i would like to reach, in my opinion, its pretty good, except about the "time" what i think its too long.I think if you "stop" at 1:32 and "revive" with a kind of new melody and many fxs could be a good idea (or not, that's what i would have done)

(sorry if I'm not being clear enough).

[ASTARTAS]

@ASTARTAS actually its not finished, but yesterday I was with doubt and didnt know if the idea was clear or confused about the "atmosphere" Im trying to pass, aaaaand... about the glue the stuff still is a big problem for me the same for the kick, but, ill work more and update my stuff, but i would like to receive "heavy criticism" if applicable, oftentimes im working and i dont know if its a good idea or not to continue working on that project.
About your new version, i dont what i should say(again,lol), you have nices fxs, fxs what i would like to reach, in my opinion, its pretty good, except about the "time" what i think its too long.I think if you "stop" at 1:32 and "revive" with a kind of new melody and many fxs could be a good idea (or not, that's what i would have done)

(sorry if I'm not being clear enough).

i would never Judge your idea ... only if you would like .. f*k with all NON harmonic stuff and it would sound like i dunno ... some dying cats in a meatgrinder ... THAN i would probalby say : dude its not a very ... bright idea haha ... i try to only judge on the technical stuff, try to workout your own style and taste what you really want to produce

[DerekMohanty]

@ ASTARTAS: I think the kick sounds a bit muddy. The punch is fine, but the tail, in my opinion, needs a bit more high and a punchier bass. Great work still though!

I also made something new, as I started producing again, this time on Genelec monitors. What do you guys think? It is a preview of course!

[TheBassliner]

Nice atmosphere right there ...I think your lead have too much pitch in my opinion, the attack of the lead sounds a little strange, but the kick is good, the melody and the atmosphere too! <3 finish it bro its really a good track!

guys, what do you think about this one?

[The RaveN]

Nice atmosphere right there ...I think your lead have too much pitch in my opinion, the attack of the lead sounds a little strange, but the kick is good, the melody and the atmosphere too! <3 finish it bro its really a good track!

guys, what do you think about this one?

You should stretch your kicks, when you pitch them, so they have the same length as the original un-pitched kick. I use kontakt for that, but there are many ways. Else, it sounds good.

My entry:

[Synthese]

@The RaveN Sounds really old school!! I actually really like the idea! Not a fan of that kick though. I know that kicks like that were used in the early days, but I don't really like it. Too much noise and could have more bass. Also, your sounds are okay, but not entirely good mixed yet. I think if you made this around 2005 everyone would've loved it! So you can use that great oldschool style, but you have to make it sound more present like: Josh & Wesz - Retrospect; 2009-style, but it fits in this time or something.



Hope you like my latest track!

[The RaveN]

The purpose of this track was to do some oldschool gated kick and bass with a little bit newer melody. I don't want to make a copy of a track that mimics oldshool tracks. I wanted to make my own version.