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sabino
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Post by sabino »

@daniro29

You just arrived the point i want to arrived, really nice track. If i was you, i really didnt know what more my project need;

About this here, i started this month and i really dont know how can i get a more professional sound, i think this is my best project until now and i dont know where i need to improve;

(Sorry about bad english).

http://www59.zippyshare.com/v/8Cm7aKNj/file.html

Vestritz
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Post by Vestritz »

@daniro29

Really cool song man! The vocals are awesome, as the screech. I like the oldish flavour of the melody, its like going back in time, didnt find details to fix on this piece, congratulations! Support :P
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typhonmusic
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Post by typhonmusic »

@akachaostheory
It sounds pretty nice, but the lead is a bit thin and the melody in the climax sounds a bit out of sync with the melody in the break. Maybe that part's just me though.

@MaliceBathory
The intro sounds really cool. Not the biggest fan of the melody, but that's just my own opinion. The whole thing seems pretty well made.


krip deejay
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Post by krip deejay »

@typhoonmusic love the melody in you archangel trcack id say need ssopme work on the mixdown but is a cool idea for sure

here is something i started on xmas day


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NRx Hardstyle
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Post by NRx Hardstyle »

@Typhoon: Sounds great, I like the "older kind of" sound you got there. Lead needs a bit less release and a bit longer reverb, as well as a little work on the mixdown. Otherwise really a really good track!

@Krip: Sounds pretty decent, the melody is a little all over the place, but nothing that has a out of scale notes or anything. The lead is a bit thin too, try layering in some more to fill the spectrum.

Ive been working on this a few months


D-tekz
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Post by D-tekz »

@NRx Hardstyle Not really a fan of that plucky lead, also the transition at 2:35 comes out of nowhere. Aside from that the track is all good,it has a nice atmosphere.

Some tracks i made in the past few days. btw ignore the mixdown


ushanka_guy
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Post by ushanka_guy »

D-tekz wrote:@NRx Hardstyle Not really a fan of that plucky lead, also the transition at 2:35 comes out of nowhere. Aside from that the track is all good,it has a nice atmosphere.

Some tracks i made in the past few days. btw ignore the mixdown

about first one: I like that :p I just think the lead needs to have some release time on the notes(dont know if you understand me, but I mean the effect that happens when you turn up the release knob in your synth :D). This will also make the lead sound bigger and more impressive.
second one: not really my style so cant say much about that, but same problem here with the leads/notes
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Asklepios
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Post by Asklepios »

@D-tekz : The first one is interesting but the lead doesn't fit. Try to focus more on the sound design, a sylence like lead would fit better imo. I like the energy of the track, it's summerish :dance: :dance:
The second one is not my style so I won't say anything on it.

@NRx : I will agree with D-Tekz, I'm not in to that pluck sound, just too thin imo. I am also thinking that you create your melody with the pluck sound, and not the lead, which can explain why I don't like some parts of it (the 1/4 beat notes). Melo is interesting, and the whole atmoshpere is great.

@krip : Sounds really filtered, kick is thin and lead and melody are too simple. Just put more work on it to go where you wanna go.

@Malice : I like the intro but kick rhythm is just too linear. Also, the melody seems good. Next time put a HQ sample :p

@akachaostheory : The piano part is a bit empty imo, add more elements to the background, like orchestral guitars. Also, as said, the lead needs more reverb but tbh, I like where you're going with this track.



Hope you will enjoy this, just started it and even if I'm pretty sure this is something I will never finish, I wanted to share it with you guys. Btw, don't mind the vocals...

There just might be a gremlin in your house
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ushanka_guy
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Post by ushanka_guy »

Asklepios wrote:@D-tekz : The first one is interesting but the lead doesn't fit. Try to focus more on the sound design, a sylence like lead would fit better imo. I like the energy of the track, it's summerish :dance: :dance:
The second one is not my style so I won't say anything on it.

@NRx : I will agree with D-Tekz, I'm not in to that pluck sound, just too thin imo. I am also thinking that you create your melody with the pluck sound, and not the lead, which can explain why I don't like some parts of it (the 1/4 beat notes). Melo is interesting, and the whole atmoshpere is great.

@krip : Sounds really filtered, kick is thin and lead and melody are too simple. Just put more work on it to go where you wanna go.

@Malice : I like the intro but kick rhythm is just too linear. Also, the melody seems good. Next time put a HQ sample :p

@akachaostheory : The piano part is a bit empty imo, add more elements to the background, like orchestral guitars. Also, as said, the lead needs more reverb but tbh, I like where you're going with this track.



Hope you will enjoy this, just started it and even if I'm pretty sure this is something I will never finish, I wanted to share it with you guys. Btw, don't mind the vocals...

Damn that code black vibe, but I really like that :D (pls finish that one :P). The lead sounds a bit too quiet and could have a bit more high frequencies imo, but otherwise really good production-wise
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DizzleHS89
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Post by DizzleHS89 »

@Asklepios - Very nice, fast paced and full of energy. Some of kicks seem a little out of place but thats easily fixed. Keep it up!

@D-tekz - I like the second preview, i take it it was a quick mess around as it says random shi? lol! Maybe try pitch the melody up to bring some change to the track.

I have worked on the below preview since yesterday. Let me know what you's think and if you have soundcloud follow my channel, going to try and get back in to this as my last post may have been about 6 months ago.


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