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[Valken]

@greentechnl
You make it very hard for me to properly give you feedback. Couldn't find anything wrong with it, haha, I enjoyed it all the way throughout, lots of sounds to keep it interesting.

@DJT3chnic
The only thing I could think of, is that the kick could be a bit louder. Also it is noticable that your bass tail is longer/shorter when it pitches. But other than that, I really enjoyed this track, got me energized, also nice visuals.

This is my latest:

[dareddann3]

@Valken I'd say focus on improving your kicks for a while. Everything else I have no comment on really. Nice leads.


My new project, work on it or throw and restart?

[Climax]

@Valken I agree with @dareddann3 work on your kick the basic kick is there but you can do way better if i listen to the quality of the rest of the track! I also don't really like the lead sound but that's just my opinion keep up the good work man!

@dareddann3 Sounds cool i really like the industrial kind of style but you need to work on when the kick pitches it loses a lot of is power with eq and stuff you can make that difference go away. Also keep up the good work!

So...here is a raw track i've been working on and i need your opinions on improvement. it's a preview and still needs some work. Tell me what you think!

[Sustain]

@DJT3chnic, nice track man ! As Valken, the kick may sound a bit louder and really nice lead btw !
@Valken, really love the vocals, but as they said before, work on your kick, and the lead sound a bit dry to me
@Climax, the vocal sound a bit loud and muddy, also, there is too much bass, so you track sound a bit "compressed".
However, I like the lead intro, and you have some good ideas, keep going !

here is what I m working on

[ASTARTAS]

@Climax _ overall i like the track, jeah as my previous talker already mentioned, its a bit too much bassy so it sounds compressed, there has to be more "high end" it sounds a bit dull, but thats just technical stuff so work around it and throw out a good track keep it up ! ( PS : maybe we should try something together ? )

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I worked some hours overall on a new track for my new solo project, so here is a snippet of the WIP cutted mainpart ( i shortened it just for testint purpose as most stuff here jeah its ofcourse not final )

[Daisuke]

@Climax: The ideas in the track are pretty cool.
Work on your mixdown and on the eq'ing and it will be a nice track

@Sustain: Rly like the Intro.
Maybe you could put more variations on it.
The Kick is good but I don't like the pitch on it.
And make the drum on the Build Up a bit quiter (I think it is a bit to loud^^).

@ASTARTAS: Very nice.
Only thing is the Leadsound.
Needs a more powerfull Lead.
And I can barely understand the Vocals.
Work on it and this is going to an awesome track =D

Here is a Raw Project I'm working on.
I just started this Project and the mainpart isn't finished nore it's near on it^^

[DaBeatPlayah]

@Daisuke Yeah dude, i get you want your melody to sound raw, slightly out of tune and have the classic (spooky) feel, but some of your notes, especially at the start are out of key. I'm not perfect with keys and tuning, but i know the odd note in there is out of place. Otherwise, well mastered really love it
@Sustain Really cool track as expected from you Heavy kick, great FX never leaves my mind bored for a second. Cool break beats, but i wouldnt put reverb on the bassdrum (has a wierd effect to it), add some dubsteppy reverse snares in there m80 ;P And if you have time, add some resident evil vocals, especially at 2:22! and before the drop haha.
@Climax Yeah, definately your mixdown and master, that bass be takin out all your highs and clipping your track heavy, i really want to hear that dank raw PUNCH! I want to hear that Resonance Really cool track and vocals tho
@dareddann3 Holy fuck! Really cool old school track, i don't like the snare in the break beat, but holy damn son, it goes hard! Work on mixdown, i know you like hearing that bassss but i cant hear much of anything else, bass down, mids and highs up I love it tho!

Here's an original piece I've been working on, took me 4hrs

[NRx Hardstyle]

@DaBeatPlayah: Fucking Love that melody and that oldschool vibe! Keep it up.

[Arcus]

@DaBeatPlayah
sick track. nothing to say besides maybe make the kick longer but you have the sub going throughout so thats all that really matters. besides that its awesome. good stuff.


i have such ear fatigue that i have no idea if this clip is garbage or not. is it worth continuing?

[NRx Hardstyle]

@Arcus: Sick screech, love it!. The kick probably needs some more distortion and eq but Its very unique. Keep up the good work!


I know halloween is played out and the amount of scary themed tracks are infinite, but whatever