@dabeatplayah nice volt remix but as sanchuc said need to bring the kick a little bit forward also love the melody in tba 6 or what ever can't wait to hear when you haveade more progress with that
@sanchuk love your 2 hardcore tracks can't really give much feedback as I don't know much about making hardcore but I do like it
Here is and update of something I'm working on still any ideas how to make it better ? Greets from Australia
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krip deejay
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Not too much expertise here, but I'll do my best! 
@NRX
Absolutely love the track, I would just want some type of echo or effect on the vocals perhaps? It sounds a little distant from the track itself, could possibly be blended in a bit better. But still great job
@DaBeatPlayah
I like how you changed up the kick in Volt, to me it could just use a little more drive or oomph behind it and less reverb.
@Valken
Love your idea, and the track overall is pretty solid. Only problem I feel is that the "Lean ON" vocals are too quiet. While I can hear them the rest of the track forces it into the background, especially during the chorus. This might be problematic since I don't think a quality acapella has been released but I would definitely try to make the vocals stand out more.
Here is my latest track, I have about 1 years worth of production experience (no real musical background) so go easy on me!
@NRX
Absolutely love the track, I would just want some type of echo or effect on the vocals perhaps? It sounds a little distant from the track itself, could possibly be blended in a bit better. But still great job
@DaBeatPlayah
I like how you changed up the kick in Volt, to me it could just use a little more drive or oomph behind it and less reverb.
@Valken
Love your idea, and the track overall is pretty solid. Only problem I feel is that the "Lean ON" vocals are too quiet. While I can hear them the rest of the track forces it into the background, especially during the chorus. This might be problematic since I don't think a quality acapella has been released but I would definitely try to make the vocals stand out more.
Here is my latest track, I have about 1 years worth of production experience (no real musical background) so go easy on me!
@EverettG Lots of elements, I like it, but you need to EQ the track more, it has no high gain, keep at it 
Here is a tune I started on today.
Here is a tune I started on today.
@Sanchuk
Voice Of Anarchy: First of all, the "kickrolls" at the beginning dont sound that good, I don't like the fact that you've faded out some kicks into silence, you know what I mean? I probably would prefer that you lenghten the tail that you get a flow in the kicks. Its obvious that this didnt happen by accident, but (hard to put my finger on it though)it just sounds too dynamic. Skill wise you've proven with older tracks that you are extremely talented and technically spoken, this track is good too. But I just don't like it that much, I don't "get" the track. The outro is badass though.
The other one: Great soun design in the intro, I just miss percussions. Would fill the part well. The break is awesome. But again, there could be more percs especially in the build up towards the drop. Great general design of the track, has a nice drive and a great idea behind it. Would be interested in this one as a promo
when finished ofc.
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@Krip Deejay
Ok heres what i got:
Your mixing intro has a wrong length. Most tracks nowadays have 16 bars mixing intro, some have 24, the old ones often had 32. You managed to have 20 - please fix this.
The track itself sounds really empty, it misses a lot of effect elements. The break sounds quite boring as it is (no offense) make it more interesting with vocals, pads, strings and so on. The melody isnt my cup of tea either to be honest because the notes don't follow a logical order which makes it sound random. The kick sits way too far in the background, mixdown wise theres still a lot of work. But first try to add more effects, percussions and overall more variation.
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@EverettG
Turn off the limiter in your master channel, it sounds really overcompressed. And like Ferren said, use more EQ, cut the lowend of all your sounds which run with your kick and lower the volume on them. They take too much space. The kick sounds really good though, nice soft reverse bass. I really like it. Look up some tutorials on hardstyle synths too.
Sorry for my feedback being so negative, hope I could help you anyway with it. Never give up, you'll get there!!
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@Ferren
The screech gets repetitive relatively fast, try to variate more with it. The kick sounds really dry and misses high frequencies or character, although it sounds really clean. I really like the idea together with the vocal, it sounds awesome. Mixdown wise it also sounds clean. So its a great start for a track but it could be more exciting afterall.
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I really liked the vocal of headhunterz' new track and tried to do a remix but had a hard time fitting my ideas of a raw track together with the really soft vocal. Anyway, this is the result.
What about the mixdown? I recently moved into a new flat and set up my monitors differently and need to get used to the new sound.
Voice Of Anarchy: First of all, the "kickrolls" at the beginning dont sound that good, I don't like the fact that you've faded out some kicks into silence, you know what I mean? I probably would prefer that you lenghten the tail that you get a flow in the kicks. Its obvious that this didnt happen by accident, but (hard to put my finger on it though)it just sounds too dynamic. Skill wise you've proven with older tracks that you are extremely talented and technically spoken, this track is good too. But I just don't like it that much, I don't "get" the track. The outro is badass though.
The other one: Great soun design in the intro, I just miss percussions. Would fill the part well. The break is awesome. But again, there could be more percs especially in the build up towards the drop. Great general design of the track, has a nice drive and a great idea behind it. Would be interested in this one as a promo
when finished ofc. _________________
@Krip Deejay
Ok heres what i got:
Your mixing intro has a wrong length. Most tracks nowadays have 16 bars mixing intro, some have 24, the old ones often had 32. You managed to have 20 - please fix this.
The track itself sounds really empty, it misses a lot of effect elements. The break sounds quite boring as it is (no offense) make it more interesting with vocals, pads, strings and so on. The melody isnt my cup of tea either to be honest because the notes don't follow a logical order which makes it sound random. The kick sits way too far in the background, mixdown wise theres still a lot of work. But first try to add more effects, percussions and overall more variation.
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@EverettG
Turn off the limiter in your master channel, it sounds really overcompressed. And like Ferren said, use more EQ, cut the lowend of all your sounds which run with your kick and lower the volume on them. They take too much space. The kick sounds really good though, nice soft reverse bass. I really like it. Look up some tutorials on hardstyle synths too.
Sorry for my feedback being so negative, hope I could help you anyway with it. Never give up, you'll get there!!
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@Ferren
The screech gets repetitive relatively fast, try to variate more with it. The kick sounds really dry and misses high frequencies or character, although it sounds really clean. I really like the idea together with the vocal, it sounds awesome. Mixdown wise it also sounds clean. So its a great start for a track but it could be more exciting afterall.
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I really liked the vocal of headhunterz' new track and tried to do a remix but had a hard time fitting my ideas of a raw track together with the really soft vocal. Anyway, this is the result.
What about the mixdown? I recently moved into a new flat and set up my monitors differently and need to get used to the new sound.
Formerly known as Maneki Neko
https://www.facebook.com/djmanekineko
https://www.facebook.com/djmanekineko
@Neko Thank you Neko! Great tips and suggestions! Ithink i got kind of lazy about the kicks, but youo obviosly right. It can sound more "there"!
I dont really know this the original track of HHZ! I really loved the drum rolls and the breaks!Thi kick it self is kind of too much for me but it shore has the "to the face" sound) I actually liked more your kick with more sharpen punch =P But this just me! What i really missed here is the melody, a nice concept melody and a twist of it. This is what it really miss in a lot of good hardstyle tracks this days. But once again, is just me =))
I dont really know this the original track of HHZ! I really loved the drum rolls and the breaks!Thi kick it self is kind of too much for me but it shore has the "to the face" sound) I actually liked more your kick with more sharpen punch =P But this just me! What i really missed here is the melody, a nice concept melody and a twist of it. This is what it really miss in a lot of good hardstyle tracks this days. But once again, is just me =))
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greentechnnl
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@everettG.
with so less experience i think you will do fine keep going at it. i hear lot's of element's and stuff that's actually pretty nice so. work on the kicks that's imo the most rewarding element in youre track so.
@DjFerren.
I like youre mixing etc. sound's very clean. but i think the intro is not very special. and i mean by that that i heard similar track's before so it doesn't sound very original to me. its pretty basic but then again i liked the track 2 so nice job.
@maneki
i think youre cuttoff kick is a little to harsh. also youre second kick @ around 40 Second's i dont like to much. but that can also be taste. other than that i like the track the melody and structure is pretty solid the anti climax is in my opinion nicely done man. i got a total different feeling when it dropped so, i dont know the original btw.
i was also workin on something and wanted some feedback on how thing's are going. this is not done yet but really wanted to share something cause it has been a while.
Greentechnl
with so less experience i think you will do fine keep going at it. i hear lot's of element's and stuff that's actually pretty nice so. work on the kicks that's imo the most rewarding element in youre track so.
@DjFerren.
I like youre mixing etc. sound's very clean. but i think the intro is not very special. and i mean by that that i heard similar track's before so it doesn't sound very original to me. its pretty basic but then again i liked the track 2 so nice job.
@maneki
i think youre cuttoff kick is a little to harsh. also youre second kick @ around 40 Second's i dont like to much. but that can also be taste. other than that i like the track the melody and structure is pretty solid the anti climax is in my opinion nicely done man. i got a total different feeling when it dropped so, i dont know the original btw.
i was also workin on something and wanted some feedback on how thing's are going. this is not done yet but really wanted to share something cause it has been a while.
Greentechnl
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krip deejay
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thanks for the advice neko still very new to this about 12 months now
@greentechnnl.
Very Raw intro, not bad. I like the variation. Your synths seem a little "Small" i guess. Definitely wasn't boring. Good Job keep up the work!
Just wanted to share, hope it sounds as good as I am excited about it!
Very Raw intro, not bad. I like the variation. Your synths seem a little "Small" i guess. Definitely wasn't boring. Good Job keep up the work!
Just wanted to share, hope it sounds as good as I am excited about it!
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Hello i started experimenting in FL studio with hardstyle. What you think ?
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