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[Fort noxious]

@Neko
Love how heavy your kick is!! I don’t know the original but I sure as hell like your version! I’ve been following your stuff for a while now and you’ve really improved! Keep up the good work man!

@dhamiri blurrboy
I’m sure there are a lot of raw fans who love this kind of style but for me it’s a little too chaotic. I think it’s because of the vocals maybe? Also I would like it better if there was a little break before the drop. It’s not bad but also not great imo.

@The Qonvicted
I think your build-up is really weird. Are you planning on putting a vocal in there before the drop? Anyways it has to long a silence before the bass drops. I think your kick is nice and hard but the rest of the sounds get drowned in it so work on your mixing. I do love a hard ass kick with some minimalistic sounds so that good!


Still not finished. Made my first rawstyle kick. Tell me what you think!

[ASTARTAS]

@ Fort noxious:
quiet professional what you made mate, i like the whole mixing and sounddesign, personally i dont think the anticlimax screech catches the rest of your work in the track maybe spice it up a bit ? more movement , more drive ? =) good luck and keep it coming !

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i started a new rawer dark project today tell me what you guys think, thanks in advance :

[msantillanes]

@Fort noxious

I am very impressed with the quality of this track. Awesome kick, awesome screech.

Only contructive criticism I can get is to create more interest. NIce work man!

https://soundcloud.com/organizednoize/track1-tbd

[nerz]

@msantillanes

the first kick has too much bass and lacks a proper punch and the lead also needs some work. the second kick (at 1:30) sounds allright though.

@Igniteofficial

i already gave feedback on skype but nice work. great sound design and i like the vocals too. only one negative thing, it's a bit repetative for me.

@Fort noxious

you've got some cool ideas but the overall track sounds a bit harsh for me. the break is a nice touch. maybe should combine the melody with the screeches? i'm sure it'd improve your main part.

i've only got a midintro to post, i'm working on the rest of the track:

[typhonmusic]

@Fort noxious, the screeches and kickrolls are really sick, and the kick is pretty well made. I really like the atmosphere in the break too.

@Igniteofficial, the sound design is pretty good, but the screeches are a bit repetitive.

@msantillanes, there's a bit too much repetition imo, the kick is rather weak, and I think you should add more to the buildups.

@nerz, the idea is pretty cool, but both kicks are out of tune with the rest of the sounds, the kick in the reverse bass sounds really empty and needs a different punch, and the second kick isn't punchy enough and also sounds pretty empty.

Here's something I've been working on lately, just for fun :

And here's a short clip of a raw track I'm making:

[Neko]

@msantillanes
The synth needs work, sounds really muddy in your mix. The buildup, like typhon said, also needs more work. I like the anticlimax though, the screech fits in there. Too bad your second break is exactly the same as your first one, try to add more details, effects and such in the track. The kick sounds alright, but your mixdown is very muddy so its quite hard to judge it. Could be a nice track when you add more stuff.

@nerz
The vocal is barely understandable, needs some compressing and EQing i guess. The hardsound synth sounds nice although very heavy on the treble frequencies. Your reverse bass aswell as your kick are on a wrong note it seems, Or your hardsound is on a wrong note, you decide and your reverse bass needs more crunch on the tail in my opinion.
Quite like the idea though, can turn out pretty nice.

@typhonmusic
Inside Job: I really like the kick, but the sample seems to be weirdly mixed down, the vocal sounds distorted in a way you didnt want that. But also hard to judge from only 13 seconds.
The other one: This nasty sound there doesn't really sound too good imo, kick sounds pretty nice though. Again, hard to judge from 13 seconds.

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[marmelad]

Agreeing with post over mine, needs a more noticeable "tok" on the kick. Otherwise good mastered, good atmosphere.



I'm a completely noob on FL studio. This is my first and only attempt at hardstyle after watching a few tutorials (After never ever had touched FL before) and then putting like 7-8 hours in one go. I know a lot of things sounds bad, out of place, and wrong, but I can't specifically point out which ones. I would love some feedback.




It's called 'the swarm' for now. From lyrics and snippets taken from SC2 heart of the swarm game and in-game video.

[Sanchuk]

Well, didnt been here for a while. Lest see =D
@Fort noxious
Faboules kick to my taste, not screeche and not too loude. Just the right portion off rawnees. All the track produced very nice. Things that maybe you can improve - the breakdown lost the raw atmosphere, it turn to be more ephoric and there was no epicnes beetwen the lead and the chords. The raw part is great in my opinion
@Igniteofficial
Really cool idea, there is really that raw feeling in this one. I cant tell much becouse its just a small part. In my opinion you should play with the vocal part and make it more spooky, make it lower, it could add a shiver
Next, we have @msantillanes Liked your kick actually, maybe you should make it a bit louder, but there is deffenetly a great punch and a bass. The melody is really nice, liked it too, but here you can work on your synth more, he sound kind of plastic, you should play with a couple fx on him, it should do the work
@nerz Well, like someone said here, it a preatty great idea, but the performance is not good yet. The kicks really not kicking and the synth is going round and round. You should play a bit with this idea and it will work! Dont give up
@typhonmusic The firs one have a lot of sit in there, so i just didnt cach nothing. But the secound cut was preatty good. I liked the kick, its kind of hardcore\rawcore kick with nice crunch. The screech is kind of creative too. I am not a fan of sounds like this but for the rawstyle listeners its really can be a great stuff
@Neko Dude, you just getting better and better. Its really creative track that you have there, its really a new fresh sound and its what the scene needs right now in my opinion. Bravo! I can only suggest to keep work on your screeches and not to use them in every farther track you will make in the future =D and maybe you should chek a bit the synth in the breaks, its kind of louder from the other parts, but still sound nice! Congrartz for a great tune!
@marmelad Preatty nice! You sould heard my first FL tracks, THIS WAS BAD! But siriusly, really good kick you have here, you should keep working and perffect it, this kick can sound really amazing. I didnt like the synths, i think this is what sound bad her, and of course, can be really great to mix this tracks down. The screeches have many hight and mid freq`s in my opinion, thats what`s make is sound so dirty. Also, maybe it has too much dist on it. The lead synth is too detuned, and has no power. This is what i heard till now =D But keep the good work, really great start

Well, after all this reviews, here is my track. I know there is a bit problem with main synth and leads, but i got a bit lazy and uploaded it like this. I would really like to know your opinions about this one!

[DaBeatPlayah]

@Sanchuk Holy f**k man, that's heavyyy <3 Subscribed The only feedback i can think of is maybe with your synth/ lead, unless you intended that it was supposed to sound thin and act as a weak part of the track i would recommend using multiple instances of your synthesizer with different lead types, E.G. A main lead, a distorted lead, a bass lead, a phattening lead and a detuned lead


Here's a possible 3-4 track e.p i am thinking of releasing


If embed doesn't work (https://soundcloud.com/dabeatplayah/ep-preview-1)

[typhonmusic]

@dabeatplayah, in the first track, the kick has way too much bass, the climax is a bit simple imo, and the lead needs work (reverb, eq, etc). In the second track, the kick doesn't have enough punch.

@sanchuk, the track is energetic as fuck, but the leads are a bit thin.

@marmelad, try to come up with feedback for the people in this topic instead of copying what you posted in another topic. I think the vocals are a bit loud, the lead is too thin and plucky, and the melody is a bit boring. The kick and screech are pretty good, especially for a beginner.

@neko, the sound design is great as usual, and so is the track itself. I can't really think of any other comments.


Link if you can't see embedded posts: https://soundcloud.com/archangel-music- ... unfinished