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[PERCEPTOR]

@The Convicted
Love the atmosphere, vocals and sound design in the intro really fit together,it sounds really experimental wich doesn't make it really dance-able, maybe a change of kicks will give it a total different drive? but then again if you are going for the more 'experimental' flow it sounds great like it is.

@A2BNixke
It's a bit all over the place man, ur sounds are nicely done and your Kicks are great but as The Convicted said there isn't really a system in it, try working on that.. take tracks from well known artists as an example and anaylize them to see how they create 'system in their track.

@NRx Hardstyle
Ur almost deaf and you are able to create this? BOSSSSS , overall it sounds nice man i'm quite enjoying the melodie and the kick sounds nice too, only point of feedback is ur outro, a bit too messy.

Here is my new Track: Victory
Finally i finished an entire track, normally i'm never really pleased with the end result but this one is good 'enough' in my opinion, what do you guys think?

What do you guys think?

[kylecb7]

@ PERCEPTOR
Just holy Sh*t man.. That is some pretty damn good hardstyle. The song structure is spot on and Eqing is pretty damn good too. I guess if i was to offer any sort of criticism its that you should maybe work on the main melody to make it a bit catchier, but again that's one of the hardest things to do. I love the vibe of the song, you had me head bobbin'

If the next soul would be so kind to give me a good review on how this sounds so far. If its bad enough, I'm going to drop the idea. Please be generous with the feedback!
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[NRx Hardstyle]

]Ur almost deaf and you are able to create this? BOSSSSS ,

well im not deaf, I cant hear some frequencies properly and have a hard time hearing low frequencies on me right ear and high on my left.

[GamerZoneUSA]

Perceptor: Holy shit bro that's awesome! Maybe it's just me but your melo sounds really high like EQ wise.. Maybe it's the synth Idk it's probably just me. Other than that this is awesome Where is that vocal sample from?

The Convicted: Can't really tell what kind of feel you're going for with the track.. The kick is really bouncy though Maybe doing something Phrantic like with it! Also what do you mean by my melody ischaotic?

A2B: Seems really over the place.. I like the drive behind it though! Work on your buildup and the lead that you used for that buildup!


Now with a drop and a 150BPM part
Also I can't really figure out in the 128 part why I can't fix the pitch of the kick but I kinda like it tbh

[SCH]

Your melody is very out of tune.

[Neko]

@GamerZoneUSA
Like SCH said, your melody is completely out of tune. Also, all elements beside the kick ofc lack reverb and proper EQing. The screech has potential though, together with the kick in your slow part it sounds quite alright. Theres still a bit work to do, especially with your harmonics. There are plenty youtube tutorials on music theory

@Perceptor
I think those seperate vocals in your midintro sound out of place, they don't really fit in there. Your vocals repeat a bit too often in my opinion and still need to be Eqed a bit since they drown a bit in your mix. Also I'd add pads in your break for more atmosphere. Maybe you could add some glitches and fx in your midintro. I know you got your fx kicks, which do their job quite well, but it could use more you know? Your kick fits well in the track and sounds really clean and good. The lead is a bit thin but alright. The structure and buildups towards all the drops are excellently made, really build up some drive there. Also I like your midintro and outro to have a pitching up screech, fits the concept very well. But the whole track doesnt hit me that much tbh, but its a solid job. Dont get me wrong, this here is criticism on a really high level.

@The Convicted
Your pluck is is out of tune at exactly 1:00, the tone doesnt really fit the harmonics you're in. I like the atmosphere in your break though, builds up towards a drop which needs to be kinda industrial. Which it is, in some way. But I'd say that your kick needs more gating maybe, this way it lacks drive. Concept is cool though, I like the idea.
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[dhamiri_k]

@Neko - that kick edit really kills it. pretty raw sheet coming right here guys. nice one

@Gamerzone - work on your pitch tone really hard man. pretty much what neko said. but it is still good try. work more better (Y)

@Perceptor - as above, solid work dude. like that clean kick man. melody is nice, could be nicer with note variations for a quarter maybe imo.

This is my work for fun, as my friend request some viral videos to date to be in a rawstyle/hardstyle track. so here it is. the kick i use from sequence7 free kick sample.

[krip deejay]

@zone dj like it mayb you should do two versions ? Would like to hear when you do it

Here is something I am working on still very new to making music would love some feedback

[The Qonvicted]

@dhamiri_blurrboy

Really liking it, keep it up! Although I think the volume of the clap is way too hard, try lowering the volume and panning it to left/right so there is more space for the kick.

Here is something I started making about a day ago, all feedback welcome.

[dhamiri_k]

@Qonvicted - nice acid there. however imo, it dosen't need to be long for the intro to fade out at 0:27, just kick it straight foward. but if you want to add a vocal at that part, its okay. nice work though