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[MRK]

So as you said @Neskarof I improved my melody This is it:

[NEKA]

@MRK, a lot better now! reminds me of EA. Melody sounds better and has more spirit in it, but it is still a little hard to follow, like you don't know what's gonna happen next. But keep it up!!

[MRK]

Yeah I know it's a bit chaotic I had big problem in second part if it and it's hearable. Thanks for help mate!

[Ninomaal]

@Shade: I like it! The kick is a little plain, it sounds good, but misses a lot of something. I like the overall idea and mastering though

is it wrong to love your own kicks?

Yeah sounds good! I like that percussion

Here's a screech i made with sylenth1

[Excitah!]

@ Ninomaal, that screech sounds sick! liking the kick too although it sounds a bit too cluttered..

@ Nekasrof, Crossbreed! nice one! cool to see some crossbreed producers here. mix is tight!

this is my latest Hardstyle track.



and because I see there are some crossbreed producers here too, here's my twist on it

[TSHmusic]

@Excitah! Your hardstyle track is great, love all the details and FX going on. The kick overpowers some of the screeches and sounds, but otherwise this is great Haven't listened to crossbreed so I'll let that one go


Here's something I made just now, my second take on hardcore music. Not mastered and poorly mixed, but you get the point

[R3cl41m3r]

@Nekasrof: Nice as always!
@Ninomaal: Nice screech, though it could do with a little more rawness....
@TSHmusic: The melody & lead is nice, but the kick needs a lot of work.

I made this test intro to help overcome my phobia of making shitty tracks.
Also, please tell me if it's alright, or if it sounds too Hardstyley....

[SCH]

The synth and the kick interferes way too much with each other, I'd move the synth up an octave or two. Also the synth needs to be cleaner as it is quite muddy right now.

Kick is also quite muddy and needs some work, but it si hard to tell how it sounds without the tail .

[R3cl41m3r]

Another one. This one's less melodic.

*edit* Updated

[NEKA]

@Kisha, the first intro is good, but what SCH said, although I would keep it on lower octave. Maybe add some tricks in the end? The second has good atmo, but starts kinda like hitting a wall, it's not grabbing the listener into it.

@Ninomaal, awesome!!! Reminds m of old Neophyte Records stuff, really good kick (could use some work) and dat screech

@TSH, great melody and kick sound interesting, but needs a lot of power, compressing and EQ+distorting.


New kick, this is just a quick try of my tracks intro, the track is more Noize Suppressor-influenced.