The melody thread (Give feedback before posting yours)
Re: The melody thread (Give feedback before posting yours)
@Tragonvalo
Melodie is nice and back-in-the-day'ish'. You could create some more space with leaving some notes. It will get more parts that keep inside people's heads. But that's just my opinion. 2nd melodie (after first piano part) is actually very very nice! Sounds could be improved, but that's just sound design.
Here my very own track I just released actually:
The Gentle - Courage. Let me know what you think by sending me a massage or anything!
https://soundcloud.com/djthegentle/courage
Melodie is nice and back-in-the-day'ish'. You could create some more space with leaving some notes. It will get more parts that keep inside people's heads. But that's just my opinion. 2nd melodie (after first piano part) is actually very very nice! Sounds could be improved, but that's just sound design.
Here my very own track I just released actually:
The Gentle - Courage. Let me know what you think by sending me a massage or anything!
https://soundcloud.com/djthegentle/courage
- battlejellyfish
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Tragonvalo: all of them are right, get the old vibes definitely, but maybe add some extra sounds to make it more colorful 
Joop: Cyber and WP impressions! The track itself is nice, just change the Frontliner kick and it's ready for a release
Had some fun, sorry for the "clipping" sound, that's because of the badly made sidechain I guess

Joop: Cyber and WP impressions! The track itself is nice, just change the Frontliner kick and it's ready for a release

Had some fun, sorry for the "clipping" sound, that's because of the badly made sidechain I guess

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@The Convicted: n2 and n3 really awesome! Really feels awesome and good starts to build into a awesome track!
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@The Convicted nice lead, personally.. I only like melody 3 and 4
I just had this melodic idea with an arp
I just had this melodic idea with an arp
Purpose, thou art the compass.
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@Soundphase; really interesting progression, would be cool to see some track with that kind of drive.
Some test melodies I've made over the past few months
Some test melodies I've made over the past few months
https://soundcloud.com/Exinfinium
Check out my new Channelhttps://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXSnKw ... 5Ei4nhLklw
Check out my new Channelhttps://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXSnKw ... 5Ei4nhLklw
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@NRx Hardstyle I like the 2nd one
3rd and 4th are decent but the first and last melo is not my style

Purpose, thou art the compass.
@The Convicted, that third melody is amazing 
@NRx Hardstyle, as Soundphase said, really like the second melody
here's some old stuff from me
(Turn on your speakers
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@NRx Hardstyle, as Soundphase said, really like the second melody

here's some old stuff from me


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@Krystaal I really like teasing and the vocals u should turn this demo to full. Krystal Island sounds very emotional, u should improve the lead a little bit,the vocal fits perfect the theme (imo turn up the volume of the vocals a bit). Anyways i really like that kind of emotional hardstyle
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Here is my unmastered demo.

Here is my unmastered demo.
HeyTragonvalo wrote:Hi !
Very nice old schoolish melo !
Here are some melodies i have made recently using fl studio 12
would love to hear any feedback !![]()
PS:Second Melody is the part 2 of first melody

I really like the last melody, has a special touch

Edit: and the one above, ofc this is amateurish as it can get, but you still feel the 2008ish vibe haha
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@Krystaal; I do like the landscape melo best, it could use a bit more work tho. But a good start nonetheless.
@Tragonvalo: Some of the melos are not in the same scale as the rest of the melo(?), tho the third melo is pretty good on its own. Also as grape pointed out, really 2008 vibe.
Probably my next track, dont know yet
@Tragonvalo: Some of the melos are not in the same scale as the rest of the melo(?), tho the third melo is pretty good on its own. Also as grape pointed out, really 2008 vibe.
Probably my next track, dont know yet
https://soundcloud.com/Exinfinium
Check out my new Channelhttps://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXSnKw ... 5Ei4nhLklw
Check out my new Channelhttps://www.youtube.com/channel/UCXSnKw ... 5Ei4nhLklw