The melody thread (Give feedback before posting yours)

[NRx Hardstyle]

@Dhamiri; Sounds like a good melody but, still needs a bit of more stuff going on.
@Ejinazinc: Sounds great, keep up the good work, maybe try add a few notes here and there bringing everything together.


Started working on this

[typhonmusic]

@dhamiri-k, no wonder your kick always sounds too quiet in other previews The kick definitely isn't overpowering the lead at all. Anyway, like ejinzic said, the melody is good, but the lead needs work.

@ejinzic, it sounds great, but it sounds a bit choppy. Try adding a few notes or stretching some of the notes out.

@NRx, both melodies sound really good, but the second one could use some variation.

[SQMDQ]

@ejinzic It sounds a bit random at times but, with some adjustments that could be one hell of a melody! Sounds very uplifting.

@NRx Hardstyle Sounds very energetic! Although, it does get a bit repetitive after a while.

@typhonmusic I like the progressive feel to it, it would sound great with some arpeggios I reckon

[dhamiri_k]

@SQMDQ - the notes dosen't fit imo at 0:01, maybe give it lower then it's ok, for the whole snippet, it's really nice. keep working it more better.

@thyponmusic - i agree with SQMDQ with the progressiveness. really good

@NRx - the atmosphere in the melody really takes me. a bit variation could be possible too like thypon said but if you want to keep it that way, then it's okay.

@ejinzic - pure euphoric i can say, i can feel the atmosphere you create. adjust a bit then it can be the best melody ever

two snippets here. Which is your favourite

[iampsych]

@dhamiri_blurrboy
1st melody is a bit odd but sounds nice after a while , it aould work out quite well , just make sure you use it in a track with the right atmosphere. 2nd melody is rather repetitive, it gets boring too soon.
Have a nice day

[leeroy]

does someone know what track this melody is from?

[typhonmusic]

does someone know what track this melody is from?

This thread is for posting melodies you made and giving feedback to other people. I think you've confused this with the "What track" section.

[leeroy]

does someone know what track this melody is from?

This thread is for posting melodies you made and giving feedback to other people. I think you've confused this with the "What track" section.

well that section is for posting unknown track snippets, all I have is a melody so it doesn't matter either way

[izkliegt]

@Ejinzic Honestly it sounds like you don't know what melody layout you are looking for. No offence, it just sounds really random within the melody. It has the right chord proggression which is the main thing! Just need to work on them melodies baby!

@NRX I've never been much of a oldschool hardstyle fan other than DOZER. Sounds good though

[typhonmusic]

@izkliegt, it would sound beautiful if you pitched the main melody down 1 or 2 octaves.

@dhamiri-blurrboy, both melodies are too repetitive, and the first one sounds a bit random imo. I prefer the second one.