Track Snippets/Previews (Give feedback before posting yours)

[Tamme]

@Nicoow I like the idea, but it sounds kind of muddy(?).

So, i started up fl studio for the first time in like a year and gave it a go on a hardcore track.
I took the melody from "Bang bang" by Nancy Sinatra and made something else with it.

[typhonmusic]

Glad to see this topic isn't dead
@ nicooow, like Tamme said, the idea is cool, but the track sounds a bit muddy. The kick could really use some treble and a proper punch.
@ Tamme, the track structure sounds really random, and the plucky synth sounds weird imo, but the kick is nice.
Here's a clip of a new crossbreed track I'm working on:

[HardStaticRecords]

hey guys

i would love some feedback on this tune im busy with...

let me know if you guys think its got something or if its cr*p??

[typhonmusic]

@ hardstaticrecords, the track sounds pretty decent, but some parts of the break sound a bit random, and the kick sounds too quiet. Also, give feedback.

[nicooow]

@ typhon music and tamme, thanks for the tips. I`m going to try and figure out how to do that. (noob)

Now...i`m having a little trouble giving feedback on your tracks ,as they are all far beyond my producing capabilities.
How can i tell someone to do something, if i don`t know how to do it myself?
All i can say, it all sounds very professional.
@ typhon , the preview sounds awesome, .. (sorry for the useless feedback)

I`m learning alot, reading this forum.
and i will keep trying.
so i hope you can forgive me for my useless feedback.
and i hope you will still take the time to listen to my rubbish and help me out a bit.

[krip deejay]

hey guys some really nice tracks im pretty new at this so not sure wht feedback i can give woukld really love to hear what you guys think of my first attempt at a hardstyle track

[typhonmusic]

hey guys some really nice tracks im pretty new at this so not sure wht feedback i can give woukld really love to hear what you guys think of my first attempt at a hardstyle track

Give feedback before posting, and post this to the hardstyle topic instead.
@ nicooow, the screeches in the intro sound pretty cool, but the kick sounds really muffled and the hihats in the first climax are too loud. Also, the second climax is way too long. The idea is pretty decent though.
Here's a remix I'm doing:

[bloodlord1989]

@typhonmusic I never herd the original so i'm not sure what it used to sound like,but the kick sounds really loud and it's over crowding the melody. You might want to cut some highs off the kick or figure out some way to mix it better.

This song I made is really special I wondered what a hardstyle song would have sounded like on nintendo in 8 bit so i searched for something like it as a ref and couldn't find a good one so I did it and randomly came up with the idea of making a little fun music video inside my DAW. Share this one with anyone who likes hardstyle if you think it's cool. Will link the youtube video and soundcloud. Don't forget set HQ for video.

[bloodlord1989]

I just realized i posted on the Hardcore Topic track reviews again. I ment to post it on the hardstyle topic. The mods should add Hardcore to the topic name and hardstyle for the other i keep getting confused lol. I also have no idea how to delete this post. above me ^

[DJ Core.Junk]

@bloodlord1989

crazy track man, I really like some of those wierd 8Bit sounds. Focus a bit more on the kickdrum and make it dominating the track. Use some sidechain on the leads e.g. or you could some of the mids of the leads to make room for the kick.

Here's something I'm working on right now: