I am competing in a small Remix contest, and I need your feedback!

[aFluxx]

So long story short, I've participated in a small remix contest hosted by a producer I follow on youtube.

This is the track that we're supposed to remake:


And heres what I got so far (beware, this isn't mastered)


Feel free to drop any feedback you like. I'm still very much learning my way through producing.

Kind regards,
aFluxx

[Thazraw]

Hi, i think ur remix is pretty nice. it sonds a little bit boring sometimes but u can improve ur sound by adding some sort of atmospheric textures i guess.

[Mythical Force]

i know this is prob late but your lead is way to thin! and the answer is Layer!!! Layer 2 or 3 synth's together where one of them is 1 oct lower then the other 1 / 2!!! and you can also make one of the synth's punch more so you get the hard fealing from the melody!