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NRx Hardstyle
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@SQMDQ: Sounds great, maybe try variating the melo, like add some notes in scale and so on, to make it more interesting. The melo is too slow for hardstyle really (I tried but it was boring) but maybe chaning it around a bit would do great. Otherwise a pretty clean sound and so on. I like it

@Chaze: Very interesting melo, sound good tho, I do like the track overall and its really nice, Keep it up!


I have no idea what this is, but it sounds interesting

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Post by Valken »

@SQMDQ: Really like the vibe of the track. The kick could use some work though, you are realling missing a punch. Try separating the punch from the tail and EQ it from there.

@Chaze: Nice! Very very nice! I don't think im in the position to criticize a track of this caliber. :rofl:

@NRx Hardstyle: Screech could use some more layers. You could spice up the melody here and there, because it is a little bit repetitive. But other than that, I really like the energy of the track. :)

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Post by NRx Hardstyle »

@Walken: Thanks for the Feedback! I tried something but Ill come back later! Your track sounds great! kick needs a bit more low highs, something in the 200hz area, also more fx and shit like that to fill up everything! keep it up!

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Post by Railo »

@Valken its nice, but try to make the lead and kick sound a lil better :p


here is mine..pls tell me what u guys think!

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Post by Valadia »

Railo wrote:@Valken its nice, but try to make the lead and kick sound a lil better :p


here is mine..pls tell me what u guys think!
Try to work on your mix, as the volumes are all over the place.
Your kick isn't loud enough, and I would turn the volume of the vocals down a bit.
Your kick also sounds very muddy to me, try to lowcut some unwanted "cloudy" frequencies.


Here's a track I've been working on, every kind of feedback is very welcome.
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Post by GamerZoneUSA »

Valken - Melody kinda gets lost in the bassline imo. Also your kick needs some work. It's needs more crunch and it also sounds maybe a little muddy but that may be the lack of crunch Very nice idea though the whole vibe and everything else is good!

Ralio- Kick is super muddy. EQ it better and it could be an amazing raw track! The atmosphere is amazing. at 1:00 keep that piano you have going when the kick first plays kinda ruins the vibe when you fade it out. Other than that it's pretty good.

Validia - Love the build up it's simple but effective! But the kick kinda ruins it.. Wouldn't really call that raw either haha

I've been working on this for a while. Not really sure what to do for a break so that explains the gap..
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Post by greentechnnl »

@ Valadia

Nice melody But yeah it needs alot of work and i mean all of the elements. the lead is to plain and simple youre kick also needs work but the idea itself is pretty good i hear alot of potential in that melody so.

@ Gamerzone

yeah its getting better but also with alot of elements i get the feeling you just randomly do something. cause again it just doesnt feel right im not even sure if things are in ''Key'' for example. in fact i know some things arent in key.

@railo,

youre doin good and someone alreay said it but work on the mixdown the lead i like very much but the intro screech gets repetetive so. also youre kick needs work.

I was busy with this dont know what i should add or take away or do with it further more so yeah.



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Post by Synthese »

@Railo: Idea is nice, but your mixdown is really bad. Try to work on your sounds and dont eq to much, but add a little bit of high in most things and get only get rid of the peaks. Kick is pretty bad
@Valadia Nice Idea, but the kick misses a lot of high and mids and the lead is to thin and it lacks of reverb and release. Also the melody is kind of boring and the basssound doesnt need to get a punch.
@Gamerzoneusa Im sorry, your track is really bad. Lead is bad, melody is random en it sounds like its in the wrong key. Kick is pretty nice for some reason, but you have to work on everything else. Idea is nice though!
@greentechnnl Idea of the track is really nice, but you have to work on your overal sound design. Lead is too thin and your snare is bad. Kick has got a nice bass, but it misses a lot of bass and your punch misses the hard tok so it comes in harder. Your track also misses a lot of reverb, especially your screech, but I really like the idea and you are on the good way!



Hope you'll like my latest track ;)

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Post by greentechnnl »

@ synthese
Kick has got a nice bass but it misses alot of bass ? can you explain that to me cause thats very confusing.

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Post by Synthese »

@Greentechnnl I meant it misses a lot of crunch and high :P sorry

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