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Postby Gunner1001 » 02 Jul 2019, 02:32

i will comment last tracks tommorow :D because im '' screwed '' tommorow allready :dance:

yet i would love to post the update because i kinda love it :D about '' long live the king ''
i kinda dont like the kick yet , as written above , it can sound clearer / more darker / more pure :D
but for the structure :D , thats i think what has improved.
what you guys think ?

Edit : before new posts i changed some things , the kicks , some faders i changed , it sounds more done to me now :)
i dont know what i should change / ad , or edit more to it :)
let me know

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Postby Gunner1001 » 02 Jul 2019, 17:44

some track comments

KRB = human disease , the overal sound when the drop comes , sounds a bit '' flat '' for me personal , i dont know , maby make it '' wider '' the sound .maby a reverb / decay on the lead will do the trick to make it sound bigger .
for the rest i like this catchy melody , good breaks , good in my opinion :) .


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@pinago = i like it in overal . yet there are some points to work on i think , i miss claps as a guide towards the qlimax , and other precussions , also a detail :
i dont like the sudden sound ending at 0:50 , maby use a fade out , that is used a few seconds later , a few seconds earlier , to let it fade out nicely and let the next lead take over the silence :).
i like the idea overall in this track snippet . good working :D .

@krb wonderfull pain , i like the melody again , kick good , the sudden volume change at 1:27 , suddenly is maby a idea to make it more smoother , give it more time to build up to that volume .
it kinda makes me think about = arix - nova :D , and i like that track :D
also i like in general :)

Soundphase : escape the simulation .
yes ! , i love the oldscool fat kicks ! , the little spacy twingles , you have to love it , but i kinda see were its going , and i kinda like it , i would not mind listning to it :) .

but if you say darkstyle , i dont know if to hear it as hardstyle , and comment it as hardstyle .
if yes , i would say , make the flat sound bigger , and let it pop out .
do what you feel is good :) !
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Postby Soundphase » 03 Jul 2019, 00:11

Gunner1001:Escape the simulation .
yes ! , i love the oldscool fat kicks ! , the little spacy twingles , you have to love it , but i kinda see were its going , and i kinda like it , i would not mind listning to it :) .

but if you say darkstyle , i dont know if to hear it as hardstyle , and comment it as hardstyle .
if yes , i would say , make the flat sound bigger , and let it pop out .
do what you feel is good :) !


Thanks. I actually made a completely new breakdown and melod. I meant to call it darkcore, but it's kind of hardstyle (like early traditional hardstyle). It's on 140BPM. I think I will make two versions of the track since I also like this wacky melo (which is in this snippet). The full intro is dope (and really trippy).
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Postby JensJacobsen » 04 Jul 2019, 16:21

Gunner1001, build was nice, of course still some improvement needs done (y) but overall well done

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Postby Freakwave » 05 Jul 2019, 22:59

@Gunner1001: your kick needs a lot of work, but aside from that I think you did well on establishing an atmosphere in this track

@JensJacobsen: This is definitely a track I would put in my playlists. If you want to improve I've got some nitpicky stuff:
  • In the kick-change at 0:28 you lose the depth and energy of your sound. Even though your kick sounds really well. But I'm not as good of a producer to know what is missing.
  • The vocals at 0:46 start too soon. Not by much, but maybe just 1 beat (if that is the English term). Therefore this whole vocal part seems kinda off rhythm.
But I really like:
  • The sound from the transition to your Melody with your Kick together at 1:46
  • The overall energy at 1:50 (this has a really catchy drive!)
  • The fast pitch change of you kick at 2:25
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Postby Soundphase » 06 Jul 2019, 22:01

@Jens Nice track.. I like the breakdowns you made, and the buildups to the climax are nicely done. Interesting track.. could imagine this being signed somewhere (Dirtyworkz?) I also got a bit of The Pitcher vibe.

I have something very different, warning: might be a mood killer if you don't feel like dark/oldschool! :+


Tell me if you think something could be changed/bettered

I was going for the 2006 asbest tracks style
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Postby KRB-MP » 11 Jul 2019, 18:50

@Soundphase
Wow, seriously it sounds like if it was made a decade ago ahah
The structure is good, I'd say that the intro is maybe a bit long
Even if you were going for a 2006 like track, it lacks a bit of high frequencies and clarity on some samples
The kicks are really as they were at that time
Pretty nice to listen to something like this in 2019 !

Ok, back to our time, here's (again) something Euphoric, I've tried to improve my transitions and buildups, also making the leads wider

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