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Postby SKRWD » 24 Feb 2019, 10:45

KRB-MP:@SKRWD
I'll check this ! I guess I'm gonna repost a new version of the track since I put a lot of work in it, but not with that crap mastering

EDIT : Way better now



Will listen once I'm home :)
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Postby SKRWD » 27 Feb 2019, 09:53

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I'll check this ! I guess I'm gonna repost a new version of the track since I put a lot of work in it, but not with that crap mastering

EDIT : Way better now



Will listen once I'm home :)


Definitely better than before!! I think the volumes in the intro are not that well balanced, though. To me it sounds like the kick is going under... The mainpart sounds a bit empty for my taste, try adding more layers to your lead and/or pads. Cool idea at 2:31 with the gated arp! :) The mainpart sounds a lot fuller now. Also like the outro. I hope I could help you, even though I'm not really good in giving advice :/

Greetz! Keep it up, man

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Postby KRB-MP » 01 Mar 2019, 17:12

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I pretty like the concept, I can't say a lot about it, it's well balanced and original, keep it up !

By the way, thank you for your feedback on my track, I'll try to work again on it later :)

So a week ago, a french youtuber started a remix context of his latest track, so I decided to make a Euphoric remix out of it (the track was kind of mainstream hardstyle)

So here's my version of his track called "Macby - Charbonneurs" (check it out it's pretty nice !)

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Postby SNOOPP » 11 Mar 2019, 11:06

KRB-MP, i like the idea, but it feels like your kick does not have much bass in it. Everything else sounds pretty clean and interesting. Good work man.

We just finished anthem for a biggest hardstyle indoor event in Estonia.
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Postby KRB-MP » 19 Mar 2019, 11:44

@SNOOPP
Insane, I love that fat kick right there, the vocals are really cool, well, great job !

Here I'm trying something softer

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Postby fallinedge » 22 Mar 2019, 23:53

Hi guys. My nickname is Fallin Edge and I am from Russia. I am 20 years old. My favorite music genre is Hardstyle. Recently, I was interested in making music. While I am gaining experience, I read and watch a lot of material. I would be very happy if you left a comment.
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Postby KRB-MP » 24 Mar 2019, 21:29

Well I guess you didn't see that you have to review the previous track

Nevermind

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Interesting stuff right there, but the main problem in my opinion is the volume, mostly for the kick imo, it lacks of power, and the climax part volume is lower than the intro. But overall nice one for a first track, keep progressing

Preview of the newest stuff coming :

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Postby Krystaal » 27 Mar 2019, 15:07

@KRP-MP,

I actually like the whole thing itself but it sounds quiet a bit empty as some "ambiance" point, like try some pads and add loads of reverb on your synths but overall it's pretty cool!



Some WIP.. :P
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Postby Valadia » 28 Mar 2019, 21:16

@fallinedge

I like your track, and the idea of it. For the pre-drop vocal, maybe focus the vocal a bit more on the syllables. That way, the vocal has a bit more impact. Besides that, the kick itself is waaaaaaaaaaaaay to quiet. Turn that motherfucker up, it's what your track is about! In the intro the track sounds pretty good, it's full-ish, and the drums fit well in my opinion. Maybe a bit dry. Your lead sounds a bit annoying. Maybe turn the decay up a bit and turn the sustain down a notch. Melody is fun, nothing too special. Sounds a bit like Phuture Noize, which is good if that's your inspiration. The transition to the mid intro is a bit sudden, you can announce it a lot better by using risers, and percussion. Your mid intro sounds pretty good, but it get's boring pretty quickly. Try to add some more elements to keep it interesting. The vocal itself could be louder, cause it's hard to understand. Your lead sounds a bit dull, coming to the second drop. Try using some pitch envelope on your lead, so it has more movement. I like your idea, it has a lot of potential, sounds like Phuture Noize on mdma. Keep it up, and you'll have a great track on your hands. Certainly a lot better than my first track :P

@KRB-MP

The intro sounds pretty cool, but the little melody get's boring quickly. Try to mix it with some variation, and break it up with maybe another screech or sound to make it more melodic. Your transition to the midintro could use something simple, like an impact sample or smth to really give the feel you're coming down afther the drop. The melody itself is pretty good, bit simple but simple can be good. I like the variation you use towards the drop, maybe use a pitch automation to give it a bit more energy. Also, use some risers and such to work towards the drop. I like the sounds you use in the background, it gives a good feel to the track and fills up a lot. Overall, a pretty nice track. Polish it up a bit, and you have a dope track.

@Krystaal

Your kick doesn't really come through. The synth is a bit too loud, and the kick too quiet. I think a bit of compression would do your kick good, so it sounds a lot more whole. I know how difficult it can be for your kick to cut through the lead and all other sounds, put it's one of the most important things in a mix. If you can make that work, you'll have a dope track.

Keep up the work guys, practise is key! :)
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Postby greentechnnl » 07 Apr 2019, 17:08

@KRB-MP
Lost In My Dreams [Remastered]

i think the highs are to much. it overall sounds a little thin. the idea is cool but the main lead melody needs a lot fuller sound. add some chords underneath i think.

@SKRWD
about that crossbreed idea. i think its cool man. sounds dope. nothing to add.

@zero opacity,
That anthem, its decent imo. but yeah the melody just doesnt gets me if you get me ;P
that kick is not my type to but that can be taste. also i have the feeling that the lead is drowned by the reverb and sounds to far away for my taste.

@fallin edge,
cool stuff. but indeed like others said. the kick is very low in volume and just doesnt cut through.
some cool idea's in that track so. keep it up.

@Krystaal.
The crypt v2. i hear some Crunch i dont like. maybe its just clipping and not in the nice way, dont know how i can say it better... But yeah. the idea is cool tho. would finish it for sure.

me binarix have been gone here for some time now, alot of stuff goin on in my life right now but nevertheless wanted some feedback on my latest snippet.

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Postby Gunner1001 » 12 Apr 2019, 19:14

@greentechnnl

i love it .
its hard to give feedback on something that sounds finished .
but , if you want it :) ,
here you go .
maby make the intro at 40 sec even more interesting , by adding the seocnd half of the intro with the kick you used in the outro at 2:43

also , it sounds perfect i say again , but if you want more , you could ad a high lead , just teasing the second half part of the drop , to ad even more things going on .

for the rest , man , this is good stuff :)



now its time for something i worked on with a midi controller i got from a buddy , first time i start to use a midi controller :)

please let me know what you guys think about it , ( side note : i want to ad more vocals to it , but i am thinking about what vocals , so keep that in mind :) )

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Postby SKRWD » 14 Apr 2019, 13:35

@Krystaal

This Krystal x The Crypt WIP sounds absolutely epic! Nothing to complain here. Please send me a test version asap ;P

@greentechnl

Really liking the sound design. Sounds a bit like Atmozfears to me. That kick at 2:38 is really sweet! Can't say much about the overall quality and mixdown as I'm listening on cheap in-ear headphones. Keep it up!

@Gunner1001

The intro (?) sounds good... But idk, the sudden key switch when the kick comes sounds a bit... Weird? Overall compared to the intro it sounds too flat and dry for my taste. BUT. You've got a structure and ideas. Work on it until you are satisfied with your results. This project definitely has potential. Keep it up, mate!

Sooo, I've been working on a new kick which is made of a shitton of layers (including my old kick), eq'd and distorded until I was satisfied with it. Also, I've been working on my sound design and mixing skills. What do you think? :)

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Postby greentechnnl » 15 Apr 2019, 15:04

Thanx for the replies mates.

If it sounds good on cheap in ears then I'm happy :D

Will check the tracks posted later and try to give some feedback.

On my phone now.

Edit:
@Skrwd.
nice start. got a little audiofreq feeling with that rythm thingy goin on.

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Postby Asklepios » 19 Apr 2019, 23:40

SKRWD I like the overall structure. I would agree that it got an audiofreq feeling but you should work a bit more on the sounds to get smthg really cool

Gunner1001 Unexpected it's the word that describes the more your track. Everything comes in without warning and disappears so quickly. It's like you're trying to put all the ideas you have on your head :p some parts pop out more than some others (volume, cleanliness)

Greentechnl Really like the break, atmosphere is great. Melody/lead sounds a bit strange at first, but it sounds ok at 2nd listening. That last part is pretty dope.

Was working on a kick and I did this. ;)
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Postby greentechnnl » 20 Apr 2019, 23:59

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Thx m8.

I like you're drive, its cool but I feel like after that were you end there should come a big bangin kick. Not the club style/psy like stuff.

I. Also really am glad that people like the last part of my track...

But tbh it's the trend right now.
The whole track i did 4/4 and in that part i just used a club/psy kick and arped the tail of my raw kick (atleast the mids/highs) and did that part in triplets. it was nothing special to me tbh. But people like that part the most.

I think of my snippet like the break i put in the most work. And tried to get a raw kick feeling in the intro/climax goin.

@Skrwd.
I listened to youre last posted track called ''andromeda''

the lead could be alot fuller if you stacked some chords that goes with the melody and balanced it right.
its to bad. cause i like the track but i also feel like the whole thing is to static.... IMO
try to make the lead a lot fuller cause the lead is what is driving this track IMO.

Also try to work on youre loudness levels... some tracks are so different in loudness that i have to adjust BIG TIME to really hear what you wanted to achieve.

It's good to read what people think about some stuff. And i thank you all for that feedback.

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