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Postby The Convicted » 28 Jan 2012, 21:13

Parallectic:Thunderbunny: maybe a bit too much dist on your tail and don't really like that part after 0:55...

New track I'm working on:


Pleaseeeee, wanna get some feedbacks :D
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Postby Blacklite » 28 Jan 2012, 22:28

nice parallectic ~:D !! good work on mixing maybe less on the kick tho. sounds like techtrance vs hardtrance


here is my newest track intro SO far, 2 hours of mixing and 10 seconds of composing.



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Postby Jhonnywestergren » 28 Jan 2012, 22:50



"my intro"
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Postby Jhonnywestergren » 28 Jan 2012, 22:52

Parallectic:
Parallectic:Thunderbunny: maybe a bit too much dist on your tail and don't really like that part after 0:55...

New track I'm working on:


Pleaseeeee, wanna get some feedbacks :D

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it's good but the kick is very bad... and change the lead synth. y
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Postby Jhonnywestergren » 28 Jan 2012, 22:57

Blacklite:nice parallectic ~:D !! good work on mixing maybe less on the kick tho. sounds like techtrance vs hardtrance


here is my newest track intro SO far, 2 hours of mixing and 10 seconds of composing.






mmmmm i like it eargasm
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Postby Jhonnywestergren » 28 Jan 2012, 22:58

Jhonnywestergren:
Parallectic:
Parallectic:Thunderbunny: maybe a bit too much dist on your tail and don't really like that part after 0:55...

New track I'm working on:


Pleaseeeee, wanna get some feedbacks :D

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it's good but the kick is very bad... and change the lead synth. y


try to eq
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Postby CyborgK-13 » 28 Jan 2012, 23:36

This is my still unfinished Drumstep track i gues.

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Postby ljk32 » 29 Jan 2012, 13:01

Nobody gives feedback anymore, we just get a million new people posting their previews without giving feedback.
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Postby Salvador » 29 Jan 2012, 17:44

Jhonnywestergren:

"my intro"


Sounds nice. Screeches are ok, melo is ok, a bit more of work on the kick and a bit on mix.


This is my newest production, hope to finish it soon.


TS
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Postby Blacklite » 29 Jan 2012, 18:50

ljk32:Nobody gives feedback anymore, we just get a million new people posting their previews without giving feedback.



Quite true, should get an admin to enforce it maybe?

I always try to give some form of feedback no matter what :3
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Postby Jhonnywestergren » 30 Jan 2012, 11:48

Salvador:
Jhonnywestergren:

"my intro"


Sounds nice. Screeches are ok, melo is ok, a bit more of work on the kick and a bit on mix.


This is my newest production, hope to finish it soon.


TS


it's a song i'm working on it's just a speedmix. youre song was good but i didn't like the lead . the kick was good but have a more powerfull lead and it gonna be good. haha sry for bad english. im from sweden-.-
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Postby Raw Output » 30 Jan 2012, 23:06

@Jhonny

Melo is kinda random, and the pluck is a preset(?) since i have a feeling ive heard it before :d , kick needs a stronger punch and more distortion, second synth sounds good, add some reverb to it.

Something I started working on today:

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Postby Shiniroth » 31 Jan 2012, 00:29

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Not bad. First kick sounds nice, but the punch is too weak imo and that screech sounds very thin.



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Postby DJen » 31 Jan 2012, 06:48

@Blacklite: heard your track at the other topic, great track man _0_
@Jhonnywestergren: don't really like your track, it needs more work and you need more practice!
@CyborgK 13: sounds good man, the sub should be deeper and stronger. try adding a reese bass, might sound good :)
@Salvador: don't really like it, sounds very very thin
@The Shade: your lead synth has too much high freq and sounds thin. i like your reverse kick and the gated kick at the back!
@Shiniroth: sounds good! i like that kick _0_ sounds like E = NC^2 tho hahaha!

here's a progressive house track i'm working on, feedback are welcomed! God bless everyone, good day!
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Postby Blacklite » 31 Jan 2012, 07:59

Shiniroth:@The Shade

Not bad. First kick sounds nice, but the punch is too weak imo and that screech sounds very thin.



My new project :D



I like this :)

Keep up the good work!

Although the Volume LFO at the end is something you could replace with better fx , didn't like it at all :c
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