Not a fan of one of the genres?





(You can't hide all the genres)
 

Freemasons - Love On My Mind (Lucas K Remix) - Free Download

All other music besides Hardstyle & Hardcore
  

Postby ljk32 » 03 Jan 2013, 05:08

Hey guys, not exactly sure if I was supposed to post here or not, but the 'Track Reviews' section is for works in progress, and this is complete, so I think this is where it goes. Anyway, it's my first complete track and it'd be awesome to hear what anyone thinks of it. If anyone actually likes it enough to download it, you can haha.

User avatar
ljk32 (22)
State Celebrity
 
Posts: 2140
Location: Australia (au)



Postby VanillaFace » 03 Jan 2013, 06:05

Dude, this is really, really nice. I like it a LOT! Keep it up!
Image
Image
User avatar
VanillaFace (23)
State Native
 
Posts: 914
Location: Australia (au) Canberra

Postby ljk32 » 03 Jan 2013, 06:58

Haha thanks so much man, means a lot.
User avatar
ljk32 (22)
State Celebrity
 
Posts: 2140
Location: Australia (au)

Postby ljk32 » 03 Jan 2013, 12:56

Anyone else think anything of it?
User avatar
ljk32 (22)
State Celebrity
 
Posts: 2140
Location: Australia (au)

Postby SCH » 03 Jan 2013, 14:05

Nicely done dude! I'd love these vocals with a 90's house beat :P
I'm grumpier than you.

Do people even read these?
User avatar
SCH (26)
Producer
 
Posts: 5480
Location: Sweden (se) Västergötland is Bästergötland

Postby ljk32 » 03 Jan 2013, 14:08

Thanks so much man, I appreciate it.
User avatar
ljk32 (22)
State Celebrity
 
Posts: 2140
Location: Australia (au)

Postby Jonas » 03 Jan 2013, 14:23

Love it man! That beat is nice to hear, fits good with the vocals/piano! Good job!
I'm just here for the music, man
User avatar
Jonas (21)
State Hero
 
Posts: 3090
Location: Denmark (dk)

Postby ljk32 » 03 Jan 2013, 14:36

Wow, thanks so much dude!
User avatar
ljk32 (22)
State Celebrity
 
Posts: 2140
Location: Australia (au)

Postby ljk32 » 04 Jan 2013, 01:37

Any other feedback?
User avatar
ljk32 (22)
State Celebrity
 
Posts: 2140
Location: Australia (au)

Postby Doeneralii » 06 Jan 2013, 01:21

I completly agree to what the others say (nice vocals, good quality etc), its well composed, cool structure, so I will continue with things to make the song even better :
The hats which play with the "climax" arent clear enough to me, the drum sounds a bit too hollow and deep to me - for me it is too strong for this soft song. Also I dont really like that the song is completely driven by the vocals, thats also the way Pop-Music works :D But if you like it - and others seem, too - its fine ;)
Ahh : The synth in the break could be a bit more cut off and could use some more volume then -> better rise, better impact ;) The Snare before the climax is too loud for me (a bit) and to conclude nicely : pretty piano, a bit more body!
BUT : these are only advanced and subjective aspects which I personally would change, maybe you change something :P

edit : where are the vocals from? They are absolutly gorgeous!
Image

Don't dream it, just do it!
Doeneralii
State Citizen
 
Posts: 104
Location: Germany (de)

Postby ljk32 » 06 Jan 2013, 01:26

Thanks so much man, I really appreciate the feedback. The only thing is, I've already said I'm done with the track, so I probably won't ever go back and touch it. You are probably right though haha. And, the vocals are from Freemasons - Love On My Mind :p .
User avatar
ljk32 (22)
State Celebrity
 
Posts: 2140
Location: Australia (au)



Quick Reply

Register or login to share your passion for the harder styles
   
 


  • Related topics
    Replies
    Views
    Last post

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 12 guests