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Postby Setenza » 07 Feb 2010, 13:22

Post your snippets/previews here in order to get some feedback and to improve on certain parts in a track.

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Postby Imil » 07 Feb 2010, 13:48

So for reason me and a friend are working on a hardstyle tune...
Here's what we've got so far (intro/break -both work in progress)

Imil & Tim - Hardstyle II.mp3
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Postby pzylence » 07 Feb 2010, 17:23

I'll say it again: too slow ;)
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Postby Wuppa » 07 Feb 2010, 18:02

ye it sounds very slow.
and a bit loud or is it just me.. :D
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Postby Dennis Aka Mash » 07 Feb 2010, 18:40

And the kick sounds more like a hardcore kick.. Maybe it sounds way cooler if you change it in a other kick with a reversed bass. :)
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Postby Jubka » 07 Feb 2010, 18:44

New preview from us.
Comment if you want.

http://www.speedyshare.com/files/207676 ... BA_192.mp3
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Postby invictus » 07 Feb 2010, 18:45

Imil & Tim.

I like :) Perhaps a little slow, and in the first minute, that up and down part gets a little too repetitive perhaps.
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Postby Setenza » 07 Feb 2010, 20:14

Jubka:New preview from us.
Comment if you want.

http://www.speedyshare.com/files/207676 ... BA_192.mp3


Nice mixdown to the intro but don't really like the kick, it lacks punch and power.
Also the screech seems that its behind something, needs some better EQ.

Working on a track with a friend:

Setenza Ft. Why-T - TBA.mp3
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Postby Wuppa » 07 Feb 2010, 20:59

Setenza that sounds fucking bomb.
Just work a bit on the screech mels, and would be cool if you made some cool 1 bar breaks. Just to variate every 8 bars :)
And the whole context of the intro, it needs like more control. but the kick is very good.
Imo the intro is too long, and as i wrote, makes it all less controlled.
More power on the mainlead, else a very good melody :)
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Postby Imil » 07 Feb 2010, 21:17

pzylence:I'll say it again: too slow ;)

Wuppa:ye it sounds very slow.
and a bit loud or is it just me.. :D

Added 10 bpm :)
Also, there's a compressor on the main fx that keeps the sound out of the red bars... so it can't really be "too loud"
Unless you mean it's just too noisy for hardstyle as a genre hehe

Dennis Aka Mash:And the kick sounds more like a hardcore kick.. Maybe it sounds way cooler if you change it in a other kick with a reversed bass. :)

I kinda like the kick, but then again... I NEVER listen to hardstyle... So I'm leave that to Tim if we change it or not :P

invictus:Imil & Tim.

I like :) Perhaps a little slow, and in the first minute, that up and down part gets a little too repetitive perhaps.

We're still working on the intro, some fills here and there etc. The final version is gonna be less repititve probably

Thnx for the feedback everybody!
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Postby Wuppa » 07 Feb 2010, 21:37

Imil:Added 10 bpm :)
Also, there's a compressor on the main fx that keeps the sound out of the red bars... so it can't really be "too loud"
Unless you mean it's just too noisy for hardstyle as a genre hehe

even tho you just putted a compressor it can still be loud , Its just the kick is very loud compared to leads. Work on the mixdown :)
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Postby Imil » 07 Feb 2010, 22:23

Wuppa:
Imil:Added 10 bpm :)
Also, there's a compressor on the main fx that keeps the sound out of the red bars... so it can't really be "too loud"
Unless you mean it's just too noisy for hardstyle as a genre hehe

even tho you just putted a compressor it can still be loud , Its just the kick is very loud compared to leads. Work on the mixdown :)


I'll check into that later then, it's probably because of my shitty speakers here... makes it really hard to equalize all volumes good :O
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Postby TheMixture » 08 Feb 2010, 01:18

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RFeiIQK2_Dw

So what you think? Give it to me! :)
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Postby Dennis Aka Mash » 08 Feb 2010, 15:53

The synth sounds a little bit weird but i like it! And it will be great if you do some mastering because it sounds distorted. Maybe you must try to put the volume of your synth or kick lower. ;)
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Postby SCH » 08 Feb 2010, 15:55

Imil:
pzylence:I'll say it again: too slow ;)

Wuppa:ye it sounds very slow.
and a bit loud or is it just me.. :D

Added 10 bpm :)
Also, there's a compressor on the main fx that keeps the sound out of the red bars... so it can't really be "too loud"
Unless you mean it's just too noisy for hardstyle as a genre hehe


You shouldn't need a a compressor on the master channel, just compress the individual channels isntead, and lower the volumes on them as well, this will give a clearer mixdown ^^
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