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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 12 Jun 2017, 10:50

@Greentechnl: Intro sounds good and pretty cool as well, The buildup is a bit here and there, melo could be more complex. Kick sounds decent. Lead could be worked on more layers and a bit more reverb. Otherwise prettty good start for a track!

Here is something that I've been making for way too long

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Postby drasticsense » 19 Jun 2017, 13:49

Hi to everyone here, im a new member from Italy :)

@greentechnnl: Interesting Track, but your Kicks are too short. At the very end of the Beat the Kicks is kinda interrupted. Your kick has to be move till the beginning of the next beat to sound full. Maybe there is a lack of low-end.

@NRx Hardstyle: Really cool nice sounding melody and transitions. The Lead sounds nice as well !
The Kick is ok but sound a little bit dull. I have actually compared to other tracks and it seems to me that the Kick is too loud in low-end compared to others. It occupies to much space within the low-end. You need to reduce the bass and bring the mid's and eventually the Hi's to the front. Otherwise i have nothing to criticize. Nice job dude.

So actually im a Hardcore Producer. I hope you can help me.
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Postby EMi » 26 Jun 2017, 15:44

@greentechnl: at the moment its cool. post the full track when you got it for a better review! :)

@nrx: as always, great job. all i can say is that if you improve a bit more you can reach a place in some label or something. the song has so much rythm and as i said in a comment time ago, the melody reminds me an atmozfears track, i really like it :)

heres something i made while vacations (i dont have my speakers so idk if the mixing is clear)

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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 28 Jun 2017, 12:56

@EMi: I actually like that kick, but the pitching needs a bit tweaking there is no pump in the low end when you pitch it. Melo could do with some more variation. Lead is a bit muddy and needs a bit sharpening, ex some minor vibrato and whatnot IMO. Otherwise a pretty cool sounding kinda atmospheric kinda track. Also you got a nice kick pattern.

Alright I've tried to make this track work properly, I do feel like it needs some sort of vocals but cant put my finger on what kind or where to find them. Also Im thinking of redoing the midintro, but I'll see what I can actually do :D
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Postby kauchris » 29 Jun 2017, 01:01

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The claps of the buildup are a bit too much in the background. The kick sound clear but got a really annoying hum sound in the low hat the highest pitched kick. Maybe you should try to pitch the kick on some parts of the track on other keys cause it sounds sometimes to linear. But anyway, keep it up and try yourself out :-)

@NRx Hardstyle
Really like the sound and the beat of the "screech". Buildup and climax are great. It's not a kind of "mainstream" kick you used, thats a good thing for me ;-) Maybe you could add some highs for the claps. Overall, hands up (H)

Soundcloud and Clyp are limiting my Track ... need a better RMS ;-)
Anyway here is a preview of my track I'm working on. I idea is to do a gently silent Track with a pumping climax and some instrumental parts. I need to chop the vocals a bit clearer and tweak a bit on the leads. But thats the next job for this track. Just listen.
Yea, thats it ;-)

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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 29 Jun 2017, 12:52

@Kauchris: Kick needs a bit of a boost in the mids and some minor crunch in the tok, really good otherwise! The lead is a bit bland, but has potential with a bit more distortion and highs.
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Postby The Earfucker » 01 Jul 2017, 18:39

@NRx Hardstyle : I'm surprised how you make those beautiful melodies in combination with the screech synth
You also you played well with the kick breaks
I have 4000 hiphop acapellas for you want 2pac , 50cent All hip hop performers i have also early house vocals
If you need the files ? i wil send them to you

Here are my 3 new tracks :



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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 01 Jul 2017, 20:06

@Earfucker; yes please
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Postby The Earfucker » 01 Jul 2017, 20:27

NRx Hardstyle:@Earfucker; yes please



Which hip hop artist Is your favorite?
Eminem are common vocals in combination with
Hardstyle these days
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Postby The Earfucker » 01 Jul 2017, 20:58

Here another bootleg track
Just for funn :dance:

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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 01 Jul 2017, 21:07

The Earfucker:
NRx Hardstyle:@Earfucker; yes please



Which hip hop artist Is your favorite?
Eminem are common vocals in combination with
Hardstyle these days

All of them ;D
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Postby The Earfucker » 01 Jul 2017, 23:30

@NRx Hardstyle
LOL ;D
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Postby Asklepios » 03 Jul 2017, 19:45

The Earfucker I'm not really into hardcore, but it seems you need to work on the eqing of your kicks. "Brain killers" has better kicks.
Also I'm not sure if it is normal or not, but when the kick strikes, everything else disappears. Imo, it needs better eqing on all elements.

Kauchris Melo is not that bad even if I think changing it a bit can improve it. Matter of taste. Lead doesn't fit, should be more "screamy" and less "squary" imo. And I like that vocal :)

NRx Hardstyle Epic drums needs a bit more work to sounds perfect, they are not deep enough imo (add some low maybe). I really like that intro, with some more variations it can be a banger. Needs a better kick too to deliver is true power but I still like it as it is.
I really like that melody too. Basic, but with a lot of energy. Leads can be improved a bit but you god a solid base here. Keep it up _O_

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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 04 Jul 2017, 10:35

@Asklepios: I've tried several different kicks, but all of them pitch badly imo. but is the tok or tail that needs fixing?

Also your melo is really interesting but awesome!
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Postby Asklepios » 04 Jul 2017, 20:00

NRx Hardstyle:@Asklepios: I've tried several different kicks, but all of them pitch badly imo. but is the tok or tail that needs fixing?


I would say both but I am not a good kickmaker. Try to get smthg like in "High Voltage - Be heard" (just listened to it). This one is good imo.
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