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Postby The Convicted » 26 Jul 2016, 14:41

NRx: reminds me of the older Toneshifterz melodies, I really like it. There's no issue I can mention :P



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Postby Emperact » 07 Oct 2016, 11:56

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I like your first melody the best. Has an old school feel to it. Excited to see if you progress with it in any way.

Number two is nothing special and I feel like number three is too repetitive.

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Haven't posted here in a really really long time, but I've started to produce a bit of hardstyle again.

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Postby Rocko » 08 Oct 2016, 03:53

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Postby Emperact » 08 Oct 2016, 09:47

Rocko:Well let's get out of the closet.

Total beginner warning!

With the aid of my friend I finally got one melody alive.

Did some work on it tonight. This is what I got.

I KNOW there's something useful there and I want to use it.

Its just raw melody thats all there is + some arp + piano mushed together that I'm not sure if they ever work together or not... or whatever....... :D

Feedback on anything is key. I know there's mistakes in there, just let me know :D



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Postby Soundphase » 29 Oct 2016, 16:09

@emperact sounds a bit like handsup but it's decent


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Postby Seamlezz » 03 Dec 2016, 20:40

@Soundphase I think the second melody is better than the first one. Maybe add a little more variaton to both of those and they should work just fine :)




Here is something I made very quickly. Any feedback is good :P Just made the base melody and adding more variation and such later. If this is going to be a project :rofl:
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Postby FinnState » 21 Dec 2016, 18:57

@Soundphase i agree with Seamlezz i like the second one better. And for the first one the same maybe try add a couple variations here and there, i don't think it necessarily needs much, a little might do it.

@Seamlezz I think the melody is pretty cool. I'd say make it in to a project :D sounds so nice already i bet with some more work and tweaking it could turn out really nice. I think it works really good with the bass line. Don't really know what to say, i believe in a finished project it will work, like you said, some variation but i think some of it comes naturally from just creating the song, unless you were thinking of makeing one of those songs where the melody is somehow always present :D

Here's something i worked on yesterday, all feedback is highly appreciated! _O_ What do you guys think i should do with it?

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Postby Seamlezz » 22 Dec 2016, 11:33

FinnState:@Soundphase i agree with Seamlezz i like the second one better. And for the first one the same maybe try add a couple variations here and there, i don't think it necessarily needs much, a little might do it.

@Seamlezz I think the melody is pretty cool. I'd say make it in to a project :D sounds so nice already i bet with some more work and tweaking it could turn out really nice. I think it works really good with the bass line. Don't really know what to say, i believe in a finished project it will work, like you said, some variation but i think some of it comes naturally from just creating the song, unless you were thinking of makeing one of those songs where the melody is somehow always present :D

Here's something i worked on yesterday, all feedback is highly appreciated! _O_ What do you guys think i should do with it?



@FinnState I really like the melody. I think I wouldn't change any notes or anything. Only thing I would add is some vibration or something for the main lead (for the long notes). I think it would make it a little bit better. And of course it's just my opinnion :p Thank you for the feedback on my melody. I'm making a project at the moment and will post some part of it to the track snippet/preview thread.
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Postby davidmartin » 15 Feb 2017, 14:13

@Seamlezz , I've got to say it's pretty damn catchy! Some quick personal opinions though, I would add a stab lead, raising the cutoff until the drop. Also, if you take the tail of your kick and reverse it, put it before the kick hits in adds a little emphasis to the end of a build and sounds great! but yeah, I love the melody & the synth sounds great! has good potential for a track, keep it up :D

Now, I'm having trouble with my melody in my track, I just don't think it sounds full/fat enough and not sure what to do about it.... (the volume, effects on everything aint perfect ATM because I haven't finished the mixdown)



Literally any suggestions are appreciated, (even if you think it's complete S**T) let me know what you think!
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Postby HardstyleHenk » 15 Feb 2017, 19:44

@David
I think the word "Fall" doesnt really fit the melody.
Could be me but it sounds a bit off

For the melody you should put more reverb on it.

Cool idea like it! :)
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Postby Soundphase » 25 Feb 2017, 16:08

@davidmartin the melody starts playing with notes that are an octave over the kick and because of that it makes it less interesting, try thirds/fifths/ or the II, IV (from the root) to make it more musical, vocal needs to be pitched up


thinking of doing tracks with these, I like them but would like to know what you think.. hardcore melodies as you might have guessed
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Postby HardstyleHenk » 25 Feb 2017, 17:03

Soundphase:
thinking of doing tracks with these, I like them but would like to know what you think.. hardcore melodies as you might have guessed

Those melodies sounds fucking sick! :D
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Postby Seamlezz » 28 Apr 2017, 15:50

Soundphase:@davidmartin the melody starts playing with notes that are an octave over the kick and because of that it makes it less interesting, try thirds/fifths/ or the II, IV (from the root) to make it more musical, vocal needs to be pitched up


thinking of doing tracks with these, I like them but would like to know what you think.. hardcore melodies as you might have guessed


@Soundphase Really like your melody! If I would change something, I would make it a little more complex. Anyway, it works well as it is. It's simple and catchy. I would love to hear it with kick and proper synth :dance:

Here is something me and my friends are working atm. Of course it's not finished or anything, we will change a lot in the melody and synths and so on but the basics are there. There are some elements of the track so you can get the whole wibe of the track. Any feedback would be nice ;)

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Postby Grape » 03 May 2017, 01:41

Soundphase:@davidmartin the melody starts playing with notes that are an octave over the kick and because of that it makes it less interesting, try thirds/fifths/ or the II, IV (from the root) to make it more musical, vocal needs to be pitched up


thinking of doing tracks with these, I like them but would like to know what you think.. hardcore melodies as you might have guessed


not really sure about the notes in the background or is it just some kind of heavy delay? maybe raising the bottom notes a bit earlier would have an uprising effect for the tension, but great melody all in all!



yep that doesn't sound like it's 2017 in any way (expect the unneccesary snarerolls) :+
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