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Postby Krystaal » 08 May 2016, 22:19

@Savage, the first one is nicely done, i really dig it;) !

Here's mine

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Postby Soundphase » 26 May 2016, 15:01

@Krystaal trancy ,not bad
@Ravage like the second one more

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Postby Krystaal » 09 Jun 2016, 14:14

@Soundphase, i like it, would add little more variation and that would be a nice one!

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Postby Soundphase » 09 Jun 2016, 15:04

@Krystaal that is a good melody, code black lead but this melody is even better than code black's (imo)
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Postby Jeefrey » 09 Jun 2016, 18:37

@Krystaal - nice melody, really nice vibe and also lead sounds good :)
@Soundphase - add more variation and will be a lot better
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Postby Tragedy1191 » 10 Jun 2016, 01:09

@krystal Your landscape track is legit! Can definitely picture that at a festival. Same with twisted sun, but the landscape is the favorite.

My lead isn't mastered or anything, just exported raw out of production so volume may be low. I like designing more of the older style

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Postby Qobalt » 14 Jun 2016, 01:53

@Krystaal - Nice atmosphere and Code Black'ish lead :)
@Tragedy1191 - Has an oldschool feeling, but some places are really random... Try to put it under scale and proper chord sequence... I know that it is somewhen hard, but you should learn this asap :)

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Postby The Convicted » 14 Jun 2016, 10:48

Krystal: chords are nice, but I don't think those upper notes fit.
Tragedy1191: that delay is strange. Otherwise there's nothing really wrong the melody, but I think you should make some variations.
Qobalt: some rhytimic issues I noticed, correct the notes :P

Inspirational wave together with NC kick.
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Postby Sashone » 25 Jun 2016, 23:50

@convicted really like the second part of the melody :) first part could do with more variation imo. nice lead :)

@Qobalt its ok but its missing something

I tried a hardtrance/hardstyle melody im not the best at producing.made a reverse base for it and quicky made this snippet its not a track.
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Postby Rhytmic Dynamics » 27 Jun 2016, 11:21

Hi there ,

I just made his melody yesterday. its not perfect, but my question :

The melody is mad in note F5 in the. Now my kick is in F1. f i put this kick uder the melody t sound like sh..

Anyone got a tip on ho to set that kick right on this melody?

https://soundcloud.com/djarnieb/hs-melodie

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Postby Soundphase » 30 Jun 2016, 15:08

@Sashone has a good feeling, more like tech trance though
Rhytmic Dynamics, just pitch the tail - simple



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Postby The Convicted » 03 Jul 2016, 08:32

Soundphase:@nRx sounds fresh and interesting
@Krystaal that has a nice feel, like it



this melo isn't my style and made it just for fun, inspired by the insane dentist Dr. loboto


Oh shit, I love these weird notes! Not sure, if you'd come up with a track including this melody, but I'd definitely have a listen to that :P



Simple, but I think it should work. Don't pay attention on the build-up, it's horrible :P
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Postby Zine-Wave » 10 Jul 2016, 16:24

@the convicted
the build up is a bit long, but doesn't sound so bad ;)
the melody does sound a bit too repetitive in my opnion tho.
but overall it sounds pretty good.



i really tried to improve on mixing for this one.
The "vocals" do need a bit more cleaning, but i wanted to know if i'm going in the right direction with the mixdown.

Edit: i noticed thah the reeverb plugin crashed while reopening the project, thats why it sounded dry in the first preview.
In this one, i managed to keep the reeverb.

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Postby Aftershoq » 12 Jul 2016, 17:30

Zine-Wave, the melody is a little to simple. And some of your long notes sound like they're randomly placed. :)
Convicted, lovely summer feeling in that one. With the right sounds this could be great.

Made 2 melody's myself, not really sure which one i prefer.
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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 26 Jul 2016, 11:32

@zine-wave: just as aftershoq said, it lax a bit complexity, structure the melody up and add more notes.
@Aftershoq: link is dead, can you reupload?


Testing out a new supersaw technique and a older melo that I remade a couple of times
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