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Postby BasT91 » 25 Feb 2016, 15:31

@Zine-Wave: Some more practice is needed, but the second one sounds like the style in 2005 and I love that!

@dhamiri_blurrboy: although that random melody sounds like its all over the place, I would dance to it! makes me smile

@Lifterz: this is a very nice melody and sounds like the summer and being happy and shit. Keeps playing in my head


This melody is pretty old, but I still wanted to ask you guys if this melody is worthy of building a complete track from it? (ignore the kick, needs to be a lot tighter)


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Postby GamerZoneUSA » 01 Mar 2016, 08:41

@Dhamitri: Your melody just seems really random.. maybe it's the saw that's messing me up idk it just sounds kinda off.
@Zine: That first melody isn't really that great. Maybe it's more old school but it doesn't sound good at all.
That second one is a lot better. Reminds me of a more 2011 style track
@Bas: Really energetic melody! Maybe it's just me but the EQing seems really off.. Has a lot of potential though

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Postby GianaWana » 06 Mar 2016, 21:13

@basT91 great melody..you have to change some notes just to not be repetitive after some seconds but it's really good. reminds me 2010 feeling
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Postby Andez » 07 Mar 2016, 22:07

https://soundcloud.com/anttu-silander/lead-preview

Tell me guys what u think! Im newb se i need help with EQing etcetc.. Tips are welcome:D
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Postby GianaWana » 08 Mar 2016, 21:43

@andez good melody and lead used! try to compress pull up the volume just to increase the power of the sound
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Postby GamerZoneUSA » 22 Mar 2016, 08:02

Andez - Reminds me a lot of Frontliner! Very good.. In terms of EQ maybe lower the highs just a little bit.. There's also a slight ringing.. idk what daw you use but in FL studio on your lead's mixer track make a Parametric EQ 2 insert and and 5 or 4 and make it super skinny so it's at 0%. then move it all the way to the top and move it left and right until you find the ringing then lower it all the way.



Brand new melody and a slightly different lead. This is for the same track
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Postby leeroy » 22 Mar 2016, 16:49

@GamerZoneUSA the upper notes work but the bass notes need to be changed I think, goodeffort though

this one is unorthodox, made in another style for fun (not serious), wonder if you think it works or not
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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 28 Mar 2016, 11:43

@Andez: Great start, you should work on the progression of the kick, also the melody needs more variables and such. Lead needs a bit of more work, but otherwise a great start!

@Gamerzone: The melody sounds like some psalmverse in my ears, the kick is half a semitone off, but the kick has a really nice sub.

@Leeroy: Very interesting, I do like the kickprogression. If you change the lead to something more like a screech, it would sound amazing. Please continue on that one!

Ive been working on this a couple of weeks.
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Postby GamerZoneUSA » 30 Mar 2016, 02:44

Is that good? Haha and high or low? I never changed the bassline so I still have to do that
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Postby NRx Hardstyle » 30 Mar 2016, 08:00

Well, the notes are in some wierd scale. Try playing around with them to get that harmonious tone.
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Postby ASTARTAS » 03 Apr 2016, 20:42

@NRx Hardstyle : i like the kick and the general feeling in the track, imho the lead is a bit to high maybe a bit more depth and "room" for the lead would make an overall better warmth in the track =)

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Postby Krystaal » 05 Apr 2016, 12:23

@Leeroy, actually ye i like the progression it has some nice feel however :P



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Postby Soundphase » 07 Apr 2016, 15:02

@nRx sounds fresh and interesting
@Krystaal that has a nice feel, like it



this melo isn't my style and made it just for fun, inspired by the insane dentist Dr. loboto
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Postby sabino » 25 Apr 2016, 18:26

@Soundphase the melody sounds pretty well, but i think it could be better in another lead.

this is the first time i try to do something like that, i know i need to work more, but i dont know exaclty what :?

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Postby RaVaGe » 06 May 2016, 21:05

@Sabino : The end at 0.28 sounds quite random, the begining is nice but you should work on that end part.
@Soundphase : Sounds nice, I like it :) maybe "open" the lead a lil bit more to give it more room.




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