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Postby Sanchuk » 12 Dec 2014, 00:58

@discjunkies
Yeah man, this is exacly what i mean. Use the first note of the vocal as a clue. Well, i think the best way to know if you are a on a right key is to play the vocal and the kick (in this case) in the same time. Now, when you hit play the first note of your vocal in loof you can hit the kick on a pad or a controller and listen to the right key. Just try it and you will have the right one in the end =)
After a couple practices it will be much easier to detect it and when you practice a lit bit more you will detect the right key just from hearing the vocals GOOD LUCK! :D
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Postby Valadia » 28 Dec 2014, 14:16

Jose:discjunkies - Sounds good! but the vocals are on a different key

Just came up with this melody the other day, so why not posting it there:

This is a WIP, I know it needs more polishing


Work some on the mixdown, it sounds muddy to me.
The melody is good, but not ready yet. Try to adjust the note lenghts here and there.

Just found out Kasparov is having a remix contest, so why not join?
Made this, but I'm not sure about it. Would like some comments :)
Don't mind the mixing and mastering. Haven't really worked on that.

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Postby mrdfusion » 25 Jan 2015, 23:24

Valadia:
Jose:discjunkies - Sounds good! but the vocals are on a different key

Just came up with this melody the other day, so why not posting it there:

This is a WIP, I know it needs more polishing


Work some on the mixdown, it sounds muddy to me.
The melody is good, but not ready yet. Try to adjust the note lenghts here and there.

Just found out Kasparov is having a remix contest, so why not join?
Made this, but I'm not sure about it. Would like some comments :)
Don't mind the mixing and mastering. Haven't really worked on that.


Klinkt goed! ik had het alleen nog wat aan gekleed!
maar verder klinkt goed en dan bass kan mischien iets voller!

Ik ben zelf ook bezig geweest met een nummer! heeft iemand nog tips?

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Postby SCH » 25 Jan 2015, 23:39

We only use English here.
I'm grumpier than you.

Do people even read these?
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Postby nicooow » 27 Apr 2015, 16:23

@ mister d-fusion, sounds good to me.. i`d like to give you a usefull piece of advice, but i myself have no idea what i am doing, as i am still learnig.

now i`ve tried to make some hardcore..
so if you want to have a good laugh, or give me some usefull tips. please do so

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Postby Tamme » 28 Apr 2015, 17:40

@Nicoow I like the idea, but it sounds kind of muddy(?).

So, i started up fl studio for the first time in like a year and gave it a go on a hardcore track.
I took the melody from "Bang bang" by Nancy Sinatra and made something else with it.
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Postby typhonmusic » 28 Apr 2015, 23:46

Glad to see this topic isn't dead :p
@ nicooow, like Tamme said, the idea is cool, but the track sounds a bit muddy. The kick could really use some treble and a proper punch.
@ Tamme, the track structure sounds really random, and the plucky synth sounds weird imo, but the kick is nice.
Here's a clip of a new crossbreed track I'm working on:
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Postby HardStaticRecords » 29 Apr 2015, 03:24

hey guys

i would love some feedback on this tune im busy with...

let me know if you guys think its got something or if its cr*p??

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Postby typhonmusic » 30 Apr 2015, 01:48

@ hardstaticrecords, the track sounds pretty decent, but some parts of the break sound a bit random, and the kick sounds too quiet. Also, give feedback.
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Postby nicooow » 03 May 2015, 12:54

@ typhon music and tamme, thanks for the tips. I`m going to try and figure out how to do that. (noob)

Now...i`m having a little trouble giving feedback on your tracks ,as they are all far beyond my producing capabilities. _O_
How can i tell someone to do something, if i don`t know how to do it myself?
All i can say, it all sounds very professional.
@ typhon , the preview sounds awesome, .. (sorry for the useless feedback)

I`m learning alot, reading this forum.
and i will keep trying.
so i hope you can forgive me for my useless feedback.
and i hope you will still take the time to listen to my rubbish :D and help me out a bit.

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Postby krip deejay » 12 May 2015, 08:14

hey guys some really nice tracks im pretty new at this so not sure wht feedback i can give woukld really love to hear what you guys think of my first attempt at a hardstyle track



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Postby typhonmusic » 12 May 2015, 17:52

krip deejay:hey guys some really nice tracks im pretty new at this so not sure wht feedback i can give woukld really love to hear what you guys think of my first attempt at a hardstyle track



https://soundcloud.com/krip-deejay/wip

Give feedback before posting, and post this to the hardstyle topic instead.
@ nicooow, the screeches in the intro sound pretty cool, but the kick sounds really muffled and the hihats in the first climax are too loud. Also, the second climax is way too long. The idea is pretty decent though.
Here's a remix I'm doing:
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Postby bloodlord1989 » 20 May 2015, 13:09

@typhonmusic I never herd the original so i'm not sure what it used to sound like,but the kick sounds really loud and it's over crowding the melody. You might want to cut some highs off the kick or figure out some way to mix it better.

This song I made is really special I wondered what a hardstyle song would have sounded like on nintendo in 8 bit so i searched for something like it as a ref and couldn't find a good one so I did it and randomly came up with the idea of making a little fun music video inside my DAW. Share this one with anyone who likes hardstyle if you think it's cool. Will link the youtube video and soundcloud. Don't forget set HQ for video.



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Postby bloodlord1989 » 28 May 2015, 15:49

I just realized i posted on the Hardcore Topic track reviews again. :( I ment to post it on the hardstyle topic. The mods should add Hardcore to the topic name and hardstyle for the other i keep getting confused lol. I also have no idea how to delete this post. above me ^
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Postby DJ Core.Junk » 30 Jun 2015, 20:50

@bloodlord1989

crazy track man, I really like some of those wierd 8Bit sounds. Focus a bit more on the kickdrum and make it dominating the track. Use some sidechain on the leads e.g. or you could some of the mids of the leads to make room for the kick.

Here's something I'm working on right now:

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